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Applejack just wants to buy a flathead screwdriver, but bites off more than she can chew. Two familiar, nosey mares may have something to do with the difficulties encountered.

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llolololol! wonder how this is gonna end!:derpyderp1:

your..... SLAVE?! LOL
FTW story, but still hillarious!

Shouldn't it be "Your slave, Bon-Bon"?
I don't think Lyra talks in the third person...

317530 :twilightsmile: Anything I can do to help. I personally wouldn't mind seeing more stories with Fluttershy as a "Foal" Services representative. I can think of a few messes Rarity could get into with Sweetie Belle, and don't even get me started with the confusions that might come with RD trying to teach Scootaloo how to fly!

dana scully did twi just break the 4th wall?

Really Bon Bon? A foam finger? I am disappoint.

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Step one in Lyra's six-million dollar mare transformation into a human.
Or Smitty Werbenjagermanjensen.

Applejack needs a hug. Derpy does, too.

I loved the writing style for this. It's like a self-aware amateur wrote it. Unless a self-aware amateur DID write it. Because if so, that means I no longer love this writing style.

That means I want to MAKE OUT WITH IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

ummmm....about that picture. is that supposed to be Hank Hill or something???:rainbowhuh:

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Just to clarify:

Herd Services = Social Services, because they're ponies.
Foal Services = Child Services, specifically.

"Now I'm lookin' for a hammer. Do you know what a hammer is?!"

I LOVE King of the Hill. This is faaaaantastic.

"And so, the orange cream horizon sunset tangerine caramel carrot satsuma cheezit-colored ponies set off for Ponyville for the second time that day" 1 minute into the story and I already love it. :rainbowlaugh:

King of the Hill and My Little Pony, two great things combined. :pinkiehappy:
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Cute stuff. Sorta feel like that trops a bit overused but nice take on it. The ball thing was especially cute as was the dragon petting zoo XD

"the orange cream horizon sunset tangerine caramel carrot satsuma cheezit-colored ponies..."
What? :applejackconfused:
ORANGE.

“Who’s we? It’s just you and I here! Do them guards love me too?”:rainbowlaugh:
I love the idea of Fluttershy as a child services worker that ignorantly destroys families. I think I'll do a story on that

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