Cadence and Shining have invited Twilight and Spike to come stay with them at the Crystal Empire. One is to see the cute ponified and foalified Spike, another is to help Twilight relax her mind from the recent events that have taken place. Then something happens Twilight didn't expect. Sequel/Sidequel to Always Calm is Flutters Mom and A Miscalculation Gone Cute and prequel/sidequel to Pinkie Pie Cake. Rated Teen to be safe.
Warning!!!Warning!!! Age regression, pregnancy, diapers, cuddling, breastfeeding and cuteness involved. Do not read if you have weak heart or this strays too far from your comfort zone. You have been warned.
Chapters (4)
Curious to see where this is going, so I'll follow.
pinkie pie cake? where the ever hating hell is that?
I'm looking forward to more of this.
Totally awesome story. :)
I'm liking this. Spike should stay with Shining and Cadence instead of Twilight.
Aw Spike called her Mama, the chap was a bit short though.
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You'll have to wait and see what happens.
3681280
Well, I thought I would slow it down a bit, didn't want to try and fit an entire idea to the story into one chapter. Sorry.
When was spike turned into a foal?
crap so im going to need to read all those prequels to understand what's going on here aren't i?....
3681952
Read A Miscalculation Gone Cute, and it should kind of explain it.
3682050
Yeah, pretty much.
3682175 which apparently were the only ones of this genera from you that i didn't read , danmit all....
how important is the canon information in the prequels to being able to follow this one?....
3682192
Depends on how you look at it. Some things you may think are useless bits of information may come back and surprise you. Then again, they could just be useless bits of information.
3682197 well i'll look at it like this , do you have bb's level of writing?....
3682201 bb? Do you mean Blueblood?
3682212 no , someone else....
3682220 Braeburn?
3682223 nooo , someone who wrote for this site....
3682225 Okay, then I am clueless.
If Spike calls Shining & Cadance his parents, I wonder if he'll call Twi's parents grandparents ?
3693850
You make a good point there.
Minor nitpick, did you really need to put Flash Sentry in? No offense but I'm sure Flashlight is still a volitile subject among fans.
You know, I wonder what Flash Sentry's reaction is going to be to the news?
3696947
Honestly that was just a tease to throw into the chapter. I don't plan on them having a relationship, other then knowing each other. Also I am sure he would probably faint if not drop his jaw.
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That was unexpected. Is Spike a baby earth/unicorn/pegasus pony ?
3697370
You know, I haven't actually decided yet. What do you think he should be? It's kind of hard to picture him as a pegasus since he didn't have wings to begin with.
3697431 Unicorn ? If you make him a unicorn you can write him causing a ruckus at the palace cuz he can't control it...
3698261
I can think up some chaotic things with that option, just have to make a minor adjustment at the beginning of chapter one.
Eeyup.
Minor error.
She soon took off to her living quarters and sees Cadence whisper something in Cadence's ear. (So she is whispering into her own ear?)
Good chapter otherwise. Keep the awesome work coming and always remember that your awesome!
3698369
I was correcting a more major error, thanks for spotting that.
Oops, I didn't see that error.
3698374 Np.
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I like this
3698623 WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE?
saw that coming.. but perhaps too far.
3700543
What do you mean by too far, just to ask?
3700549
Well Pinkie Pie Cake already has that situation going on. And more fun and different mindframe when not in womb. Just my opinion.
3701877
Um, I don't plan to let them have recollections of their time in the womb of their new mother's.
3701881 i kinda figured that. But in Twily's case it's kinda wierd having your brother be ur dad? I dunno i guess i just prefer regression without the womb involved.
3701936
I understand, I hope you still read my stories though.
I can just see Rarity being super paranoid right now. Cause now all her friends are foal and she's the only one left... For now. MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
This is fun and all, but this is starting to be headache inducing. Why would the Apples have a tree that grants eternal youth and Cadence know how to foalify Twilight. Now that three of the Mane Six (plus Spike) are babies and two mares are pregnant with the other two, I would like to see what would happen.
Honestly, if I had to choose this and adult foals, this is preferable.
Personally, if I was in Twilight's position, I'd be freaking out. What if the spell didn't regress her mind? Did it? The idea of being transformed into an infant against your will and losing everything that made you who you are, AND being placed inside someone who didn't originally give birth to you scares me. And not only that, the Princesses gave them permission and Shining and Cadence are completely okay with what they did to her. That scares me even more. I hope Twilight's mind didn't actually regress, or at least Shining and Cadence will tell her the truth soon after she's born. Here's hoping they find a way to reverse the spell, on Twilight and all her friends.
Will we actually see Cadence give birth to and raise Twilight? Will they be open and honest about what happened, or try to keep it secret like the Cakes did? If I was either Twilight Twinkle/Velvet or Night Light/Orion, I would tell Cadence and Shining right to their faces: "The moment you give birth to Twilight, we're taking OUR daughter back!" Also, that comment Cadence made about what if Twilight's adult mind was intact while she was inside her tummy (which I hope turns out to be true) sounds like a good "what if" scenario for another chapter or story if it isn't. Please update soon. Sorry for the long comments I just had to get that all off my chest. I do enjoy this story.
3701936 I can only hope the plot DOES not come from Karas.
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Eh?
3904423 Karas is a six-part anime made by Tatsunoko. The protagonist of that anime was a product of incest and has a high insensitivity to pain as a result.
Okay, fine... the part where Cadence casts the sleep spell on 'Twi and regresses her reminded me of that scene from Karas, but much, much lighter than that. Also, since Cady's pregnant with 'Twi, does this mean that Spike's the older brother?
Finally, my head's starting to explode from the diabeetus. But... for the sake of the story, I will soldier on to the end. I consider this an antidote to watching a movie about the Mothman :P
3904449
This may be a chock, but the only anime I ever watched was Zoids: New Century Zero, Dragon Ball and DBZ, so the series you just mentioned, I've never watched.
ETA on next chapter, please?
So will twilight forget everything? Because I find that kinda mean especially with the others to
What's the Fic where spike got turned into the foal. It's the only one. I couldn't find linked in with the others in aj's part and. Really wanna read it. Please tell me