Luna receives a message from a mysterious stallion to meet him at her old castle.
The meeting doesn't go as expected.
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Need better description on how celestia got "captured", but the rest seems a quite fun intro, will patiently wait for more
Who know, maybe twilight may become the guest of honour later...
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In other words, Discord messed with her mind, made her think she was leaving, and tied her up during that time.
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I hope those are good things?
3685411 uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum
you don't want me to answer that
*Waits for more*
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If it has to do with a perverted mind...
... I've got one to.
Though if it's criticism, I'd be willing to listen.
3686947 well i saw the word ball-gag so then i just thought: oh not this again
but either way i gave it a read and i now think you have a obsession with tickling
This needs a sequel.
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Me? Obsessed with tickling? Whatever gave you that thought?
3696797 ....... i really want to tickle you now
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I'm a -ler, not a -lee.
Someone tries to tickle me, well, remember what Fluttershy did to Mane-iac's Hair Dryer Cannon?
3699835 i did but don't worry my tickling skills are at level forty
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Forty out of?
Oh, and who would you tickle of the mane 6?
3705603 forty out of 10
as for your question..... hmmmmm...... rainbow dash
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... I agree with tickling Rainbow Dash, but I'm just going to get back to writing.
3705631 yeah i look forward to it
but can i give you some advice?
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Yes?
3707900 try not to use item of intercourse in a none clop fic because when i read this i had half a mind to leave and never come back
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I never imagined anything like that in this story, but thinking about it, I can see how some of his "tools" can be used in such a way. I was more thinking along the lines of, at worst, a blade slightly piercing the skin and you pushing into it instead of away, or making something sting twice as bad as it would normally.
Uh, I'll try to watch out for that in the future.
3710216 yeah i know the torture drill but...... yeah now you know it would be best to use a normal bag or a sock in the mouth because the sexual way is what ball gags were made for
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THAT? That was your problem?
I said I based this story off of the image at the top! That image uses a ball gag! I'm sorry for staying true to the basis, but that's what I like to do!
3712679 that's fine it's just i thought that you drew that pic yourself for this particular story
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Eh, no worries. I'm not that good of an artist, and most of my art never finds its way to my computer.
3715139 oh that explains it then
do Cadence next
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I'm not writing this right now, but we'll see what I do.
nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope
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my thoughts exactly...
Tee-hee!
I love this.
Do you roleplay at all by chance. I'm sure you and I could come up with something deviously ticklish.
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No. I'm just not interested in roleplaying.
5538017 Ah well.
If you're interested, I've done a few pony tickling stories on Furaffinity.
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I'll be sure to check them out.
Instant fave
wait thats it!!?? o,o
Can you make a chapter 2?
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I probably won't. If I do write more fetish stories, I'll probably start a new one. For now, though, I want to focus on my non-fetish stories.