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Vanner
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AMAZING STORY
It really was quite heartwarming
Read this during Calculus. The guy next to me noticed my eyes watering and asked me what was wrong.
I told him I was reading a sad MLP fanfiction, and he gave me a weird look.
No regrets were had.
Its so sad. The tears are flowing, and Rarity now has a much larger amount of respect from me.
A very nice 'origin' story, as it were - simple in scope and solid in execution. While I would say your description was often serviceable enough, the dialogue was where this story really shined. It was natural, to the point, but never overly blunt (and often quite emotive). A fine piece overall. I enjoyed it, so thank you. Keep up the great work!
Wow, that was really beautiful. I came here expecting something completely different (no thanks to the description lol) and finished off with something that warmed my heart rather than tearing it apart.
And that's how her shop got it's name
Yes that's how 
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