This new year, each pony in town is determined to make their resolutions come true. The good news is that Discord is willing to give them exactly what they asked for. The bad news is, he's still sore over a thousand years in stone.
He stepped onto her back, made easier by his positioning,...
"His" should probably be "her."
This chapter is very familiar. Just replace Caramel with a human male, and Pinkie Pie with a human male that was transformed into Rainbow Dash, and I think it may be similar to another story written by an equally great author.
I get that this is a story specifically about sex, but it annoys me greatly when characters are twisted out of all convention for the sake of the plot (pun totally intended). What are the chances that the very first stallion Pinkie encounters would be willing to rape her? I'll tell you: Very low. If either: A. Discord was shown to manipulate Caramel as well, or; B. The stallion she encountered was described as a known troublemaker; this chapter would make much more sense.
How does "make everyone happy" translate to "be subject to erotic mind control?" And why are those who were previously friendly to Pinkie now willing to treat her so cruelly? Unless you're implying that Discord is controlling them too, in which case why does "make everybody happy" translate into "get gang-raped?"
Well, that escalated quickly. I know it’s out of character for these guys, but I’ll bet some people in the real world would legit do this immediately if this happened.
Interesting that Pinkie didn't just die at the first command.
Of course you'd write this.
Absolute obedience is an interesting fetish...
A chapter written by Best Author about Best Pony.
Chapter two: Pinkie Pleases Practically Everypony:
"His" should probably be "her."
This chapter is very familiar. Just replace Caramel with a human male, and Pinkie Pie with a human male that was transformed into Rainbow Dash, and I think it may be similar to another story written by an equally great author.
Subtle, what this fic is not.
That's not everypony. That's not everypony at all!
You went to quickly to "Simon Says" to Rape, I find.
I get that this is a story specifically about sex, but it annoys me greatly when characters are twisted out of all convention for the sake of the plot (pun totally intended). What are the chances that the very first stallion Pinkie encounters would be willing to rape her? I'll tell you: Very low. If either:
A. Discord was shown to manipulate Caramel as well, or;
B. The stallion she encountered was described as a known troublemaker;
this chapter would make much more sense.
what the actual fuck is this shit
How does "make everyone happy" translate to "be subject to erotic mind control?" And why are those who were previously friendly to Pinkie now willing to treat her so cruelly? Unless you're implying that Discord is controlling them too, in which case why does "make everybody happy" translate into "get gang-raped?"
Well, that escalated quickly.
I know it’s out of character for these guys, but I’ll bet some people in the real world would legit do this immediately if this happened.