Loss. What is a loss? Is it losing something close? Or is it feeling like something inside you gave way? How do you cope with such a thing? No one knows for sure.
While in Trotsylvania, a mare by the name of "Fluttershy" meets a gentlecolt named "Dr. Van Helstallion" and must be protected from a vampiric demon who is, not only, persuing her, but killing other young mares in the village.
With the return of Flutterbat and the transformation of her entire group of friends, including herself; Twilight must put a stop to it all before things go too far.
After the Fall Formal things don't go so well with Sunset Shimmer she slowly spirals downward before hitting rock bottom, moments away from doing something she will regret when, to her, the least likely of people come to her rescue.
Rainbow was administered as a patient at the Canterlot Asylum after trying to kill Fluttershy. Now, the friendships of the Mane 6 are put on thin ice, and more lives may be on the line if this doesn't end. Will the Mane 6 live to love?
. . . . . Wow. Wow, bro. Wow. I didn't know you could write like this....oh my Chryminy.... This was amazing in the most horrific, brutal, and destructive way. Amazing piece of writing, and to ,, and , screw you; to , screw you for not giving a crap that Fluttershy was gonna die; and to , /)
Awesome story, Acriimony. Not only did I genuinely love it, I am also well ensured that I should be haunted by this for the next few months.
Why do I get the feeling someone just drove Fluttershy insane to the point that she just killed herself? This is just a really really sad story, not exactly scary. Unless I got it completely wrong...
4458469 Fluttershy's a dumb bitch--simple as that. Shoot her in the face and she'll take it as a compliment. Anyway, thanks for the feedback an' stuff.
btw, how would you like to see a *snifffff* clopfic?
Nice so far! I like where this is going!
First comment up!
morbid, BUT AWESOME!!!
morbidly-awesome
Whoa. That was... horrible (in a good way). I just... wow.
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Wow. Wow, bro. Wow. I didn't know you could write like this....oh my Chryminy.... This was amazing in the most horrific, brutal, and destructive way. Amazing piece of writing, and to ,, and , screw you; to , screw you for not giving a crap that Fluttershy was gonna die; and to , /)
Awesome story, Acriimony. Not only did I genuinely love it, I am also well ensured that I should be haunted by this for the next few months.
Sequel! Sequel! Sequelsequelsequelsequelsequel!!!
3818609 You got it.
Why do I get the feeling someone just drove Fluttershy insane to the point that she just killed herself? This is just a really really sad story, not exactly scary. Unless I got it completely wrong...
3850974 Dark, not scary. Someone's controlling her.
Someone.
3852031 Or someTHING.
Oh, wait, this is your story. Nevermind.
3852162 Or something, yes.
I liked it, but logic got in the way. If you fully enact suspension of disbelief, it's actually quite nicely written.
/10
4458469 Fluttershy's a dumb bitch--simple as that. Shoot her in the face and she'll take it as a compliment.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback an' stuff.
btw, how would you like to see a *snifffff* clopfic?
4462130 Boy would I!
SOMEONE THREATENED FLUTTERSHY!
-IT IS ON!
-WHAT SHE SAID!
-AHM IN!
-As am I!
*all of us lock and load*
4518984 where's pinkie?
4522046 Oh she's stuck in the Dan vs universe.
4523811 oh...
4556124 Thanks for the positive feedback :D
AH! I really should've looked at the sad/dark stamp. sleep ain't happenin' tonight.
Good job!
4606995 lol, thanks :D
What is with he mystery's man? Who the hell was gunning for them?
k what the fuck