This is a story of Twilight`s childhood with Shining and Cadence shows up. This is my first story. So please be nice and criticism is welcomed.
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Aunt Celestia
Hi to keep it short I like to read. My oc name is Cloud Runner thats about it.
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There is a few grammar and spelling mistakes but all in all this is very good for your first story keep it up i hope to see more stories by you
I second snowbash53's opinion, it is missing a few words here and there, as well as grammar, but it's still a wonderful story! I would love to see more about how Cadance and Shining Armor get together. The romance was sweet and subtle.