It was a normal day in Harry's house. Well... until a rainbow colored equine appeared. More on that later. Anyway Harry and his mum along with his dad were on there way to a movie premiere... what movie you may ask, none other than the one the only... Dimitri the Movie. As Harry and his mum and dad drove across the London bridge his father called out "Harry are you excited to see this movie? I paid good money to get to this premiere and if you don't want to see it now is the time to speak up."
Chapters (2)
3882816 Why? Why was it so terrible?
Frikkin' trolls.
3883398 Yes, he has an opinion, so he MUST be a troll
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Also, this story gets an F.
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3883482 I revoke the troll comment, as you have an actual reason. And I respond to your comment thusly: the self inserts (Which I'm assuming you are speaking of the italic/ bold sections) were for comedic reasons. And, the description is a bit lacking, I understand. I'll talk to the author, see if we can't fix that. Also, it is not a crossover, the author is just uncreative with names, and his room is plastered with Harry Potter, sorry for any confusion.
However, the story stays as it is at the moment. Only future chapters will be affected.
3885254 FYI, "self-insert" refers to the premise of the story, in which the author is the protagonist, therefore inserting themselves into the story.
Seeing as it generally amounts to little more than blatant wish-fulfillment, it's largely looked down upon.
As the author of the story and this being my first story I actually thank you for your comments of the story. I would like to also say that I am sorry about the lack of description and that is definitely something I am working on with chapter 3. I ask that not only you continue to express your opinion, but that you give the story one more chance with chapter three because I swear I will take each and every comment into consideration. If at the end of chapter 3 I will accept the final commands and decide whether or not to continue with the story. As I said I except and welcome you reviews but I do ask that you do not post full hate about the story. If you don't like the story that is your opinion and I accept that but, I also ask that you at least comment why you don't like that. I also ask that you do not hate on my writing advisor The12GageKId_Bron3 he has had very little to do with this story and most certainly doesn't deserve any kind of hate on this story or any of his other stories which are amazing. For the three who did enjoy this story enough to leave a like I thank you for your support and will continue to thank you. So I please ask you to continue reading this story and to add anything you would like to see happen in this story to coming up in the future.
Continue to leave your comments on to how to make the story better!
3893031 This data will be stored in a databank, thank you.