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Rainbow Shimmer, 'Aurora,' is the daughter of Princess Celestia. The Princess of the Dawn has returned to Equestria from Canterlot High. She's back. It's the 300th year after her disappearance. She left 300 years ago because she was a show-off, and everypony hated her. She hopes to return and not be hated, but is it possible for a pony to change her ways?
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The pacing of the story is way too FAST. Too many things happen without any détails or descriptions, any confrontation is resolved right away. You even managed to resolve the whole EG in 300 words without describing anything or building any character interractions.
And the plot is ridiculous and full of holes, you don't describe anything, there is no struggles and no characters interractions at all in the whole story.
Kill me.
I like your story. Why does it have down votes?
4336219 ...I miss assertive Fluttershy sometimes.
I have read this story.
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