It all started ordinarily enough. Go out for the weekend with some friends attend a masquerade try to meet some chicks. That all goes away when the door to my hotel room doesn't lead out into the hall.
Now I'm stuck turned into an anthropomorphic raccoon with all the skills of a master thief and no way home.
(Writing this when I get bored or stuck writing my other story.)
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Huh.... I actually approve of this. GJB.
Could use some work but looks promising we will be watching you.
I really like it, keep up the good work.
sees title
some made a story of him clicks to see FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
its not rocket racoon ah well reads
Spoilers!
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GAAH SLY COOPER I USED PLAY THAT GAME THE TIME
Continue please
There. I don't really see why there was a need for all the errors. I think you would benefit from a proofer. It would be for the best.
Sly Cooper, Rocket Raccoon.
I was really expecting option be, but I guess this works equally as good.
Nice!
3998586 I thought it'd be the same thing.
This will be just as good though, I expect.
4001722 It is but still
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Really? Why would you think Rocket Raccoon with that cover art?
4001907 Didn't see cover art i only saw the title and was kinda like holy shit its either rocket raccoon (unlikely but possible) or sly as they are the best coons evar
Yay!
BTW, Sly Cooper is best raccoon.
I have all the games for PS2.
Please grab an editor or at the very least look over your chapter again.
I almost read this until I realized it wasn't actually Sly Cooper in Equestria and instead another installment of the League of
Self-insertsHumans Acting Villainous. You are such a tease with that image and title.Seriously though, bronies keep doing that; writing one or two chapters of Sly/MLP and then dropping there babies faster than a bad father. It would be nice to see one take of the ground.
As for this story, well looking at the comments has lead me to believe that this is poorly written, which, when combined with the fact this is one of dozens of stories of its kind now, has turned me away from reading it. Get an editor, and update frequently, and you may have yourself another reader.
You've really got something interesting here. I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm also looking forward to finding out more about his time in Equestria before he was turned into stone.
Grammatical errors abound, BUT still very enjoyable. I like where this is going!
I'm half-expecting him to steal Luna's tiara, while she's wearing it, when nopony's looking.
4003405 no do the old 'ooh piece of candy' trick. she would never see it coming!
4003564 As long as she's wearing it, I don't care how it gets tolen.
Oh boy. This is gonna be fun, I can already tell.
Awesome!
STEAL ALL THE THINGS!!!
God why anthro.....are the ponies anthro? Or just sly.
I like this!
But i still hold my opinion the Garrett is the BEST thief ever.
nice story but you do need a beta reader, I spotted a number of gramma and spelling mistakes
4013604 Sly was always anthro and from what I can tell it's full pony. Can't be certain yet so prepare for the worst hope for the best.
4045745 ya that was my question. I knew sly was considered anthro, just was hoping for normal ponies.
Update?
Update?
Am I the only one that has read the new chapter? wow... Still it was a nice surprise to find out that those rooms were the chambers of Celestia and Luna. Keep up the good work.
Im glad your writing this again.
Woo its good, hopefully we see more of this soon.
I think he should steal Luna's crown while she's still wearing it and have that drive her to lead the investigation.
Access to their private chambers you say?
Uuuh, this gonna be good.
And while he had access to the roal chambers, he should raid the the lingerie drawers. Just for shit and giggles.
As for who should take the lead as dectective? Thata though one. Twi woul be an obvious choice, being all methodical and stuff but depending on what kind of character Luna is in this fic, it could prove even more entertainment.
Decicions, decicions.
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I know if I do Twilight my maps for the story gives me a Zenigata vibe.
But Luna gives me more of a Carmelita feeling keeping with the Sly Cooper aspect.
Do I want heavy comedy or minor romance?
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Uuuuuuhhhh, Twilight as Zaza. Its so obvious. Comedic gold!
Why coose? One can have both, romance spiced up with moments of comedy.
4252226 Nice chapter!
Go with romance.
Wow, not bad! Keep on writing these!
A dumb waiter, nice to know that they still use those things. Could be the best thing to ever come to date in this story!
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Nice chapter, got lost in that huge paragraph a couple of times (As in I actually ended up re-reading some lines over and over
There are some others, but those are the ones that stuck out.
You need to work on your punctuation.
4252226 I say go with both! some comedy and romance would do the story good!
Oh, god! I can't wait to read the next Chapter!
Typos everywhere, lost interest, get an editor.
Dis gona be gooood I say if Luna liked "Sly" but didn't let on, and then you gave her a shock pistol then you have a good Carmalita Montoia Fox right there