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KiyoHosokoawa00


Well... You'll see alot of different genres from me. But i love to review more than write myself. So... You may not see many updates but when you do, it will definitely be worth the wait!

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An all new Take on the Original Friendship is Magic Canon!

In a World where Spike was just Celestia's younger assistant...

Twilight Sparkle and Vinyl Scratch are not only best friends and Students of Princess Celestia, but Vinyl Sctratch is Twilight's Adopted Sister.

When Twilight discovers the Prophecy of the Mare in the Moon, Vinyl Scratch isn't sure what to think and doesn't know whether to follow her, or resent her. But when the Princess sends the two of them to Ponyville to prepare for the Summer Sun Festival and make some friends, things begin to take a turn.

But is it for the better? Or the worse?

With new fun Characters to join the Mane Cast and Four Extra Lovable Ponies to enjoy in this retelling of "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (Season 1)"!

(( Hopefully to be called the "TwilyVinyl Sisterverse" ))

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A/N ::: To make up for Cancelling my previous series: "Please/Onegai Ponies!", I'm ready to dedicate myself to this new series that came to me in a Dream.

Quick Note ::: Many Personality Conepts had been borrowed from the story "The Unexpected Love Life of Dusk Shine": http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41270/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine

Credit to the Author.

MLP: FiM to Hasbro and Lauren Faust

(( Story Rated 'TEEN' for use of Mild/Strong Language and SOME Sexual Descriptions ))

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 23 )
Comment posted by Xarsor deleted Mar 4th, 2014

KiyoHosokoawa00 i got a question when will the next chapter come out for this story

4138418 As of recent, I have been busy with things at home, but I am hoping to have the next chapter up within the next few days. If not, then hopefully by this coming wed. I appreciate the concern! Thank you for your support!

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Real Life problems have prevented me from doing so. Including a Job, a loss in the Family, and even my previous device breaking and losing all of my data.

#reallifeproblems

WOO HOO YAY VINYL SCRATCH IS A PART OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE'S FAMILY!!! :yay: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile:

Well I sure am happy with this update and where it's going so far!
Also I hope you can get another chapter soon even though you have a lot on your plate.
Good luck!

7480061 Well I am incredibly honored and glad you're enjoying it! I am now currently working on (The REAL) Chapter 1 AND Spike Chapter 1, rotating between the two. I am making sure that the events are indeed happening in unison with each other. Though many spoilers for everyone reading the comments as well...

Spike will NOT have a chapter after each main chapter every time. Generally, Spike Chapters will happen as Omake Specials that show how certain events in each main actually happened.

I'm trying to give Spike more purpose in this verse as an actual key character to the story, instead of him acting as comedy relief, an assistant, and just another episode with him.

So again, I thank you for reading!

So far so good. The interaction between Twilight and Vinyl is excellent, as is the concept of them being both sisters and Celestia's students. Looking forward to see what happens next.

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I certainly am enjoying this new take on Spike, and giving him his own chapters.

"She said to get a life."

But I dont Wannaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Interesting, Spike rooming with Pinkie at the Cakes as Celestia's assistant as opposed to living with Twilight as her son/brother/assistant. Added with Twilight having Vinyl as a sister and I can already see a great deal of Chaos and cacophony emerging from this situation.

Well done.

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It's very hard to say. Real life has been catching up with me and with the expiration of my previous device, I had to start from absolute scratch for the next chapter. But I have been working on it. Please be patient and expect an update in the future!

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