Twilight and her group of pony friends took over as the bridesmaids for Cadence and Shining Armor's Canterlot wedding. What happened to the first three? ...
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Nice little story to explain what happened to Lyra, Moon Dancer and Colgate. Have a like.
Okay... I guess it describes what happened, but that's all it does. There's little emotion, and things go by too quickly. It's rather bland. This really should be three times the length it is. I wish I could give you some tips to remedy this issue, but I have the same problem with my own stories.
I do have to mention that "Colgate" is just a nickname the fans use. According to Hasbro, her real name is Minuette. I don't know if you care or not-- I just like making sure misconceptions are avoided. After all, it doesn't really make sense to name a pony after toothpaste when her mark is an hourglass.