Placed in a similar context to human society, a true gentlecolt stumbles across an startled mare and teaches her a very important lesson
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Placed in a similar context to human society, a true gentlecolt stumbles across an startled mare and teaches her a very important lesson
Nice and wise. Thanks!
I was like :D. Then I was all like Why is there morals and crap in my ponies? Then it was well written and well done.
Good work.
Very eloquent.
Nicely done, but my one complaint here is the use of the flipped exclamation and question markers.
The English language does not use these symbols and I would highly recommend that you remove them post-haste because they break up the flow of the story.
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I was actually wondering about these; Spanish DEMANDS them to be used since they mark the beggining of a question in the middle/beggining of text. I wanted to try these out and see what I got.
The correction is made mate, thanks for reading.
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Was a pleasure reading.