MUSTARD IS BEST PONY. MUSTARD GOES WELL WITH ANYTHING. MUSTARD IS TART AND DISGUSTING ON ITS OWN.
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With that ending it sounds like another squeal is around the corner perhaps?
10/10 For the best pony's story.
Damn it Mustard, stop being so awesome. Wait, what am I saying?
How long did it take before this sequel was requested? An hour after the first one is my guess.
well done
I'm gonna need a semi to get the blood back from my crotch after this one.
I hate mustard as the sauce, but I love mustard as the pony.
I'm loving this series
Spike is celestia and discords son. Calling it right now.
Great story! These are really starting to look more like long chapters then a new story, but hey, whatever works for you.
One thing I would like to get straight though, Spike isn't making love to any of these mares. It has all just been sex! Hot, sweaty, hard, a little weird (thanks for not writing the scene where Spike gets Mare Dick by the way), fuck until you can't feel anymore, romptastic sex! No love, just the act.
Just want you to keep that in mind if you do have Spike, and another mare, really falling in love if each other. Or Griffin, or Dragoness. Really, the way your doing it may be Celestia, after Spike has been fucked out of his amateur stage and can best powerful creatures like, Luna without potions. Who's to say that it won't happen!
Keep being awesome!
Oh, just a thought but, if that first potion gives a female a dick, why not have it give a male two dicks!
Just saying. Think about it!
Muthafuckin' win. We need more Spiluna clop on the site.
4081713 You sound like a cunt.
Seriously, there needs to be a "spike gets dicked" chapter. It has been mentioned numerous times, so now it needs to be said>....
And seriously, Spike and Applebloom, and then Spike and Luna were able to do all of this stuff with all the potions.....makes me wonder, how much of it is the potions, and how much of it is 100% drake?? Obviously Luna is very happy at that, as well as Applebloom, Applejack, and Twilight.
Now we need that next installment of this "Talkverse" to happen!!!
4082713 At least I have chicken cuntbag.
Alright here is what is going to happen.
You are going to make a sequel about this with lots of smutty sexy stuff mixed with a good plot.
And it is going to be a fantastic story.
I have faith in you.
NOW GOOOOOO!
“Come now, Spike.” Luna smiled as she slipped inside. “No need to be so formal.”
when luna said that I thought this would follow.
"I've seen you naked!"
i'm not sure how to feel about this series now
big mac?! this I want to see *grabs pop it corn*
IT WAS SO CLOSE TO BEING FUTA. FUCK.
Also, some corrections:
Luan is best poneh.
I wonder what direction pas is.
Yay!!!!
The story has a story. Neato!
Going to read this tomorrow, as I'm on the verge of passing out
(2:43AM)
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I'M GUESSING NOBODY EXPECTS YOU
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*sees interesting story in featured box*
*clicks*
*reads description*
---> "Done on request for Minimoog Voyager"
Never in a million fucking years did I imagine I'd click a random link and see a fic written for you.
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Wait, if this is Gamer Luna universe, does that mean that it's Princess Molestia too?
Dear Nine...
Gamer Luna!
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More please, greenthumbed!
Wonder what will happen when Spike was doing it with Gilda?
DUN-DUN-DUUN! Please, continue, sir.
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- Do you did me facepalm. But, it is a goodwork, bro.
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Don't mind the Mindless guy.
As far as the stories, it's alright to have these stories set up as seperate stories, like what you have now. It just seems like it because it looks like each story could be seen as a continuation of a previous one.
When you are using characters in stories in relatively the same universe for your stories, it's paramount that they are set on somewhat different ideas, otherwise it is a bit of a violation, and you could be flagged for it.
Here's the real reason (again, my opinion) why they are set up as different stories, even though the characters and the personalities are just the same.
1/ The Talk---Spike is coming of age, Twilight, Applejack, and Big Mac teach him about the "birds and the bees", and during that discussion we learn that obviously it looks like all of Ponyville is in one huge herd, where basically anypony, male or female, can rut with anypony else with little problems.
2/ Teenage Hearts---Spike is currently in a bit of a herd with Twilight and Applejack, but is "helping" Applebloom with potions, and Bloom needs Spike's spunk to make them work. Coincidentally at the same time, Bloom's need for Spike's essence leads to her losing her virginity to Spike, and we find out that there is a little bit of attraction for both of them. But the premises are different from The Talk.
3/ Portions and Princesses---Spike and Applebloom are looking for more ingredients for potions, it can also imply that Spike and Bloom are in a bit of a relationship, though it looks more like a FWB situation. And of course while Spike's in Canterlot with Bloom, he runs into Princess Luna, and at some point through Bloom, he and Princess Luna go at it. Again, the premise for the story is different from Teenage Hearts. The only things that are related is that the characters once again are the same, just in different situations.
TL/DR: Having this story and its prequels are not violations of meme or other things that would be inappropriate by the mods. Besides there are dozens of stories and sequels that show up all the time. I think you will be fine.
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YOU SAY THAT AS IF I WERE WORRIED;
MUSTARD DOES AS MUSTARD DOES.
AND THE MODS BE DAMNED.
4094347 the same opposite is said about the mods, they have the power and right to ban and delete you and your work from this site. So yes, do what ever you want. Just don't be surprised if you cause some real trouble some shit happens from it.
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THEN MUSTARDS GLORIOUS REIGN WILL CONTINUE ELSEWHERE.
OR ON A DIFFERENT ACCOUNT.
MUSTARD IS LIFE.
4094403 MUSTARD IS LOVE.
I sense another sequel in the works....AWESOME!!!
aawesome
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sequel?
i would love to see a sequel
OMG
WTF
I gotta say, these are sexy, yes, but what I love more than anything is an actual story that goes along with the delicious clop. The sex is great, but to have something else arching over it all is fantastic, and makes me smile. Bravo on that!
I'm always looking forward to more.
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'OMG WTF' WHAT?
DO YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH APHRODISIACS?
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No, they just creep me out, because... HOLY GOD I'M 16 FOR PONY'S SAKE!!!
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WHAT IS A SIXTEEN YEAR OLD DOING VIEWING MATURE FICTION IN THE FIRST PLACE?!
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Do I care? I'm even an mature author...
...and do your caps lock is broken? :-P
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CHECK MY PROFILE.
AND ALL OF MY OTHER COMMENTS.
AND THE LAST HALF OF THE DESCRIPTIONS ON MOST, IF NOT ALL OF MY STORIES.
MUSTARD SPEAKS LIKE THIS ALWAYS.
AND IF YOU'RE A MATURE AUTHOR, WHY ARE YOU SCARED OF APHRODISIACS?
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:-P, I don't know, that came suddenly
I'm so random
S-s-s-s-s-sequel bomb!
Do it.
I want more to laugh. Please.
Dragon
Spike breaking bed like a boss!
Besides the implications of bisexuality in Spike, I really like these stories. I do look forward to the next one.