Pinkie Pie throws the best parties. Several of the biggest events in Ponyville, or even Equestria, have been planned by the pink pony. But then her parties take a turn for the worst. Drugs and alcohol get involved, and the one day she decides to step in, she is beaten back and put in a state of weakness and vulnerability.
While in her coma, Pinkie looks back on her life, realizing that her past wasn't anything special. It was merely a series of events that all played into her ultimate end, brought down upon her by her own friends. And she realizes then that there is nothing to rely on. No light, no dark. No hope, no fear. Nothing but the coldness of nothing, and the ice that forms where friendship used to be.
One-shot I made!
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Wow I stared at those three words for an hour never stop smiling. I wonder if it's actually like that in comas. Poor pinkie I hope some one writes a happy ending to this but this was good just to sad );
Omg! That's so sad!
Nice, short, and eloquent. Well-done.
Simple but powerful, I love it. It's a nightmare of mine to be trapped in a comma--is it like waking up from a long sleep or are you just trapped in your subconscious in dreams?
4102509 I never want to be in a coma. I hate being helpless, and I don't mean because of myself, but because of not being able to help others due to my vulnerability.
4102325 Why thank you!
4102061 I never know what it's like. I picture it like being between life and death. The Void of the universe. And I love that you like those words! Never Stop Smiling. I think it's a message Pinkie wrote for everyone. Not only the ponies she knew, but for the reader. Her last act of breaking the fourth wall.
Kingdadydicord I feel the same way
4103487 Actually, everyone would be crying but Pinkie. Because she's dead.
4103487 Actually, everyone would be crying but Pinkie. Cuz she's dead. I killed her, or at least, this pony here did------------>
4104449 Nothing like a good ol' scapegoat
4106011 Exactly! Actually, I was originally going to have her wake up. But what would have been the fun in that?
4106017 I know right
Personally, I prefer when there is a twist
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ljkghvYATW1qj0zk3o1_500.gif
I SWEAR! IF YOU DON'T BRING HER BACK SOME HOW, SOME SPELL OR SOMETHING! I WILL FIND YOU AND TAKE ALL YOUR....your....I WILL TAKE EVERY LAST PAIR OF SOCKS YOU OWN!
4106037 LOL! Love the pic, and (To quote my idol):
Twists and turns are my master plan, then find yourself back where you began. Twists are great,a
4106232 No! Not my SOCKS!
4106980 THAT'S RIGHT! THE ONES WITH RAINBOW PATTERNS AND UNICORNS ON THEM!
4109258 FRICCKKKKKK!!!!!!!
It was a beautiful story
4114236 Why thank you! I did something similar in my story The Last Drop, but that one was a little darker.
4134496 I'm sorry, I can't tell if this means it was sad or if you were frustrated or whatever. Could you use words? Not trying to sound spiteful, just I didn't understand that!
4139256 Oh, makes sense! Yeah, I got another comment like that.
Mane 5 (twilight instead of pinkie) would never do that!!!!!!!!
4270302 Who knows? We haven't seen them in a situation like this before.
4272686 your right but they didn't think before they acted
And agreed and even if they did think obviously they didn't think either long or hard enough
4272686 and especially dash wouldn't do that to pinkie
4272686 and they could of just fed her through a tube just saying
4272686 but still it was good and sort of bad story
. Bad because pinkie died
and mane 5 killed her (sort of but yea
4272686 sry bout all the comments
4281543 It's kay, and after three years, this was the most humane solution they could have had.
4283387 oh right
but still they should've let her die slowly and if she wakes up feed her just saying
4283387 I meant
not 
hehe 
4295458 S'all good. And maybe... maybe things can change... someday...
GREAT story!
Now plz excuse me while I go cry
4591389 Thank you! And you are excused to cry as much as you want, that's the goal of the story.
Before:
Sounds Interesting!!!!
During:
Nuuuu!!! This is why we don't do drugs!!!!
After:
4726088 So is that a
(I hate to admit it, but this was good), a 
(Why would you write this? You sick monster!), or a 
(This was really good!)
4732939 A little bit of all.
Edit: Don't get me wrong I love parties... But drugs and alcohol aren't cool.
4732946 Good enough for me!
4768314
Lol, love that song!
4771993 I drew a tiny bit of inspiration from that, but also drew much inspiration from "Say Something." Hence the title.
You killed Pinkie.
You killed Pinkie.
You killed Pinkie!
That was so wrong!!
And don't you dare give me the bull about it being the only way! Ha!
You ever hear the story of the guy that was comatose for twenty years??! And then he woke up!!
I am very mad.
They decided to let her die within... 5 minutes of being told the option? ...I know it pushes the agenda of the story, but I would have thought they'd try to do anything and everything to wake her up and save her.