I feel like this chapter is more; it seems like there's something that wasn't here before. Which is a very odd thing to feel. I'm pretty sure I need a character sheet: Starlight, Midnight, Moonlight, Night, they're so similar that I could have sworn one corpse had a regenerating spear. I'm pretty sure it's because of this confusion that I didn't feel for the characters as much as I should have. Which brings me to one last thing: naming patterns; I don't know whether I'm hoping the names are more or less symbolic than they appear. More so I can exclaim "I knew it!" or less so I can be surprised.
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I feel like this chapter is more; it seems like there's something that wasn't here before. Which is a very odd thing to feel.
I'm pretty sure I need a character sheet: Starlight, Midnight, Moonlight, Night, they're so similar that I could have sworn one corpse had a regenerating spear. I'm pretty sure it's because of this confusion that I didn't feel for the characters as much as I should have.
Which brings me to one last thing: naming patterns; I don't know whether I'm hoping the names are more or less symbolic than they appear. More so I can exclaim "I knew it!" or less so I can be surprised.