Anyone else notice the lack of Seabreeze stories?
What the [Censored] happened last night? I can't remember anything but somehow I ended up going from a 19-year old girl, to one of those annoying breezies. At least I'm a brony, or pegisister (whatever you want to call it), or I'd be as clueless as a character in one of those dumb HiE stories.... And I'm pretty sure this is one of those, isn't it? Well [Censored].
WARNING (MILD LANGUAGE): "[CENSORED]" IMPLIES SWEARS, WHICH MAY NOT BE ALOUD IN THE DESCRIPTION, BUT ARE SURE AS [CENSORED] IN THE STORY. SO IF YOU'RE GONNA BE ALL [CENSORED] ABOUT IT, DON'T READ THIS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
Updated everyday or so, every other to say at the least.
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Annoying? Seabreeze is awesome!
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Lol.this is actually pretty funny.
4168381 I know, and god those are just so cute.
Nice...
4168797 i'm a girl, so Queen?
isn't the breezie portal stay closed for a while? and how are girl gonna take to the baby?
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1~ Well, the episode didn't mention how often the portal closes, it could re-open every few days.
2~ You'll have to wait and see.
That last line...Conker's Bad Fur Day reference?
That last line...Conker's Bad Fur Day reference?
4170046 *Claps* You get a free internet cookie!
4170228 Cookie? I wanted anti-gravity chocolate!
While on the topic of C'sBFD I have a working, in box copy for the N64.
4170282 Lucky, I don't even know where my N64 is, all I have is the dumb Game-Cube (Which the only good game I have for it is Super Mario Sunshine), and the Dumber Wii (Which just plain sucks).
4170352 Don't dis the NGC. Mario Kart: Double Dash, Luigi's Mansion, and a few others were awesome.
But I'm digressing.
Because of BFD, I'm trying to chase down a copy Conker: Live and Reloaded, which was for the original Xbox, but was one of the few that was back-play compatible to the 360. It had an up-graphic re-make of BFD.
4170545 Good luck, may I recommend searching thrift stores? They usually have a few neat N64 and X-box games.
4170570 I've tried, but no dice.
it is Monday?
4170928 It's tuesday I think.
4170956 I do hate Tuesday's but my Monday's are weirder.
4169001 Kingly Queen, then?
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Breezies saying fuck. Considering Seabreeze's foreign language rant in the canon episode, it doesn't surprise me that much.
4183518 i prefer it like this:
4184231 So you somehow code swapped. I'm already skeptical of you because of that.
4186292 What?
4186875 You changed it again, but you can't code-swap because I deleted the comment.
4186875 Lemme test something:
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Sun Sky is such a cute name. Can I use that name for Seabreeze's wife too?
Anyhow, interesting story. So the OC in this story is a girl...in Seabreeze's body...can't wait when things get really awkward.
Still, not nearly as funny as my story idea, where Vegeta (from TBZ: Abridged) and Seabreeze switch bodies. Since they're both voiced by the same actor.
Did I mention my story will have Vinyl Scratch in it too?
Anyways, cute story.
I know this is a comedy and I shouldn't take it too seriously, but I still expect it to follow logic. At least to the extent the show does. What you've written is known as a coincidence. That's not a good thing. Good writing 101: It's okay to use a coincidence to get a character into trouble or a tight situation. But to get out of a tight situation, the character should have to figure it out on their own without outside help. For the most part, I like this story. But you, as the author, have committed one of the greatest faux pas an author can make.
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It is wednesday my dudes
Minor nitpick, but Tinker Bell is two words