Rainbow finds herself in a tragic accident, an accident resulted due to her bravery, loyalty, and love for a single stallion. But even when death seems so close, these two won't waste a moment without one another.
Emotions, memories, and secrets will be revealed to the two ponies, and new feelings will present themselves in the form of a blossoming flower.
But when fate creeps in, so close you can taste it, the question dawns us. Even after the death of one we cherished...
Has the love we shared die along with them?
Story inspired by the song, "Majestic" by Wax Fang
Chapters (3)
Kind of boring, but its just chapter one. I assume it will get better.
4242150 indeed
Great start but I must know what happened to dash!
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That's a bit harsh. It doesn't reveal everything at once.
It's called "divorce".
Bravo sir!
I assume you mean: "Please, oh please".
I don't know, it doesn't deserve the like to dislike ratio that it has. But I think it would have done better if you posted 2 or 3 short chapters first. It seems like people are quick to judge an entire story based on 1,000 words today...
4242867 Well thank you :)
I don't really let a few dislikes discourage me though. Still gonna finish this thing :)
4243170 Awesome. I have over 150 dislikes on one of my stories. It sucks but it can't bring you down.
Holy crap.
First time a description has got me to want to read a book; and I generally avoid tragedy, too.
I really love it
4245816 Thank you, I'll take all this into high consideration, and I fully understand the confusion of not knowing who the protagonist is, but I didn't want to rush anything too quick. My writing moves relatively slow, taking in the atmosphere and character behavior before explaining the true plot.
Thank you ever so much for excepting my request, and to clear up the whole Pinkie Pie issue, the ponies walking into the waiting room went in this order: AJ, Pinkie, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Twilight.
Nebula, your writing is doing it again, kicking me in the gut and almost making me cry.
Keep it up.
Does Love Really Die? I don't know because you haven't updated yet
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Take it easy, friend. Chapter two is in the works. Just take a deep breathe in... now let it all out. You see? Don't you feel much more relaxed?
4249221 Lol ok is there any ETA?
4249243 Tonight, if not, tomorrow morning. I don't want to rush anything here, I want my writing to be as good as it can be, and that takes time. Trust me, I would poop out amazing poetic masterpieces if I could, but I sadly cant.
4249246 need a proof reader?
4249254 Really!? S-sure, that would be wonderful. Do I just PM you the story?
4249259 Yep just pm it to me when ready ill be on all day and most of the night. Ill pre read all future chapters
4249266 Have you ever pre read before?
4249270 More times than I can count
4249272 Alright, I trust you will do a fine job of seeking out any typos of the sort. There shouldn't be too many, maybe 2 or 3 the most. Thanks again, man. It really helps. :D
4249275 no problem anytime.
"What is love baby don't hurt anymore"
"What is Love"
Wow, this is amazing! I don't usually care for first person viewpoints, BUT THIS IS AWESOME!
Stay Awesome
RDD
Awwwwww
that was awesome 
you did an incredible job with the feels and you sculpted the words so beautifully thank you for an amazing story 
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Well it isn't done yet, my friend. More chapters to come in the future! :)
4286242 I'll be looking forward to them definitely
ksjakwkkdjakskkwbskabksjsj da feelz DX
If she die,s I going to be pretty mad if that's ok of course
Tracking this to see if it ever comes off hiatus, but great job so far
Update Update update update update update? ? ???
Please update. PLEASE! I really want to know what really happened to Dash and why she’s in the hospital.