I am a culinary student and i love to read when i get the chance (or just watch netflix, if I'm feeling too lazy to get a book). I also want to write me some MLP fanfics for some of my favorite stuff:
Old, Corvo is proud of the work that he and the rightful empress has accomplished. The Outsider comes to him, though, after many years of silence. The Void was nearly destroyed, and The Outsider has a new challenge for Corvo, and a deal that Corvo cannot begin to refuse.
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Pretty good chapter, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see where this goes.
corvo killing discord is even more stupid than that story where he killed the regal sisters.............. assassination skills work not on those who lived a millennium and can kill an assailt in a sinle blast.
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You have every right to say that either story is not idealy perfect, even stupid, and i cannot agree with you more about the story you referenced. I read it, and I made it a point not to write mine like that. I mean no disrespect to those who liked that story and the one who wrote it, it just wasnt my taste. I will do my best to write something that is acceptable. Thank you for your insight, and the reminder:)
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Thanks:) Hopefully i will be working on it soon. I have lots more story to go!
Question. Why discord?
(and please dont drag king sombra into this)
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Fair question. It is my beliefe that Discord would be curious enough that he would play with the rules of existance. It will all be explained later, but Discord just seemed to be a great candidate for my story. What would you rather see? I am genuenly(spellcheck) curious.
4244084 as for king Sombra, I had not even thought about adding him in this story. Didnt really like his character so much. Dark as he was, he was not well defined
4243796 also, though he was not killed, and Corvo certainly does not have to kill anyone as per the game goes, Discord was turned to stone by six innocent little ponies. He was caught off gaurd.
4244122 that seemed to be the power of the elements. it tore nightmare moon from luna, and likely killed whatever amount of existence she actuall heald. discord was powerful, dangerous, but had enough capacity for good to not be just destroyed.
I love Discord. I am not a fan of stories where he's underpowered or easily overwhelmed. But he has weaknesses, besides the Elements. He's incredibly cocky, very reliant on his powers, will jump into situations he doesn't understand, risk his safety out of curiosity about something, has severe ADD, and is vulnerable to a number of psy-ops, particularly post KCaFO. And if this is during the changeling invasion, he's a helpless statue. So while as a fan I don't want him to *die*, I do believe a clever and powerful character could defeat him. It will take smart writing to be believable, but it can be done.
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Agreed:)
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You mean my dishonored story?
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Took a look at yours and it is not the story that i had read and disliked. I shall take some time to read yours, though. Then i can can tell you what i think of it:)
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Thanks!
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Go ahead. I don't really like the oldest one because the writing is not that great, and because I wrote it a while ago, back then I wasn't too much of a good writer. I'm working on another one that will be much better, and it should be releasing soon.
I love the concept, but you could do w/ some proof reading.
Otherwise, nice chapter.
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Lol yeah. I went through it myself and found some discrepencies. I will most likely do some kind of re-write in the future as the story developes
Omg SQUEE! I LOVE Dishonored!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also LOVE MLP so put them together and you have a wonderful recipe of gorgeousness! I'm in love with it! Great job :)
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you are enjoying it.
"It's Empire of the isles" not empire isles.
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Thanks! I never really though about it. Consider it considered:)
This is truly a good story why not many ppl read it is beyond me.
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Thanks! It might be due to the fact that i have not tried to join many groups and the fact that Dishonored isn't the hype right now. People are much more interested in Fallout. Doesn't bother me really. It's fun to write:)
It is #epicness
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When you have time go through the first chapter. There are some i's not capitalized and the first letter in Corvo is not capitalized. You should also find a way to signal that we're going to a different viewpoint. Such as ------- going across the screen.
CORVO!! NUUUUUUUUU *pauses* great story by the way *continues* UUUUUUUUU!!!
You shall be rewarded with a 'stache for your excellence
The only thing that could make this better would be having Ace Ventura, the Pet Detective, make an appearance as a pony, with a magnifying glass magnifying a black imprint of a dogs paw as his mark *hint hint*
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This is really good. I like it a lot.
Shining armour and the royal guard...
FOR F#*KS SAKE!
Great fic so far, love Dishonered, and I love this fic. Can't wait to read more, and I wonder what will happen when Corvo meats this "mysterious dragon shaped mismatched creature".. I'll bet it'll be quite "chaotic", eh?
(Pun intended)
You might want to do another read through of your story. I noticed several missing letters along with a few incorrect forms of some words when speaking in past or present tense, but beyond that i found the chapter to be a fun read.
Yay it's not dead!
Good to see you back my good sir.
Rip story
That actually wasn't too bad, except in the sense that Corvo really gets beaten up by the barely-competent cartoon horsies far too often and easily for the seasoned assassin that he is. Maybe you an pick it back up again at some point.