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Fullmetal Pony


Why the name? FMA is awesome. Why the avatar? I like One Piece even more. Welcome to my page and enjoy the stories!

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With all her recent work, Rarity is in desperate need of restocking her clothing supplies. Luck crashes down on her in the form of a superb fabric. As sooth as silk and incredibly flexible, the fabric is like a dressmaker's dream come true.

A test run of her latest design proves Rarity might have gotten more than she bargained for though.

A Kill La Kill Crossover. Edited by AnonponyDashie

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Comments ( 21 )

Aww, only one chapter?

omg... you didn't... you did... omg you genius.
Why isn't this on the front page!

more i love kill la kill na did love this!:rainbowlaugh:

Good to see this up and getting some favorable comments. :twilightsmile:

Please tell us you're actually going to continue this, and marking this fic as completed was a mistake?

Very enjoyable, but a bit abrupt. I'd have liked to find out just what exactly Sweetie did to make the Life Fibers revert to their viral default. In any case, I can see Ponyville developing rather more of a nudity taboo than most of Equestria in the near future. And that's not taking into account the consequences of a town full of Kamuis...

In short, there's actually quite a lot to work with in the aftermath here. I hope you revisit it at some point.

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Holy crap, this has breakneck pacing just like the original KLK. NEEDS TO HAVE MOAR!!!

MOÀAAAAAAAR!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Very cool stuff, but you sort of give the impression that there's more to the story with that ending.

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I can't believe nobody else posted this image yet.

Also, A+ work. Nothin' like good old fashioned Kamui shenanigans and ponies to brighten up your day.

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please write more crossovers of kill la kill I love that anime series :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:its my favorite show behind the mlp fim TV series which is my number 1 favorite TV series :rainbowkiss:

This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read... AND IT NEEDS A SEQUEL!!!

Whatever the crusaders did, it caused the Life Fibers to go into full-on 'clothe the world' mode in like ten minutes. Ragyo should take notes.

Public nudity; ponies without hair... That would make (nearly) whole town exhibitionist LOL

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I just hope you take well to a bit of dying

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Very nice! And like a lot of folks have already said there's plenty of room to move forward from here; it works as a one-shot but also as a great launching platform for a longer tale, :raritystarry:
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I almost put this down because the whole concept of making exceptionally skimpy clothing and all the jokes that go with it falls kind of short when you consider most Equestrians are more or less nudists or wear clothing only for fashion or prestige. In Kill a la Kill, the series would have been rather different if no single fucks were given about nudity by any of the characters.. Here, I felt like you were building it up on a baseless and very silly foundation, but the lampshade throwaway comment about Applejack and skimpy clothing not mattering if you don't wear clothing regularly made me keep on going.

As for jokes/humor/everything else...

I didn't find the main focus-Rarity dealing with sentient Sang's insistence on being skimpy as possible all that funny. In fact, the only chuckle I got out of this entire fic was Rarity's unhinged rant when she tried to give Sang to Twilight. Probably has a bit to do with the whole Equestria is more or less nudists, so in the majority of cases wearing a short skirt in this setting implies you bought the wrong size more than any sort of sex appeal. Then again, I'm probably overthinking all of this.

As for everything else (grammer, plot, character)...Eh. It works, but doesn't really stand out.

Still, a somewhat amusing diversion if nothing else.

“I have quite a few questions about this stuff too.” Twilight’s eyes glinted. “Spike, keep an eye out for any fabric remnants. I want to research this stuff as much as possible.”

Dang it twilight, you just jinxed everyone.

Pretty awesome, liked and followed.

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