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This is stupidly hilarious.
This is completely amazing. I need more!
Why am i partially expecting her to break out like this:
Correction: Ich muss zugeben, dass Seamus einen sehr groĂŸen Ständer hatte, als er mich umarmte.
4289013 Will fix it right away! I was hoping for a German person to give me some expertise. Thnx!
That feel when Kansas City.
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Cause I live there...
Celestia X Human, what do you want more?
ok this is just awesome!! grĂ¼sse aus deutschland
4289285 Spot on duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude!
Did... did you just try to turn the TARDIS sound into onomatopoeia?
Regardless, I'm afraid I'm going to have to pass on this story. It has too many errors, both grammar and structure-wise. If in future you manage to clean it up, I may have another look.
So…we enter the family guy scenario…ah just a question you told me he is shy, I don't exactly see him to much shy, and also…I hope Celestia has a heart, I mean 'make him her fuck toy?' not even 'fuck body'? that…that its just cold I just hope this man can think of a way to come back at her
FInally! I story i think should get featured
gets featured.
you deserve it bro.
4289385 If you're up for editing then say so bro!
4289411 This idea of yours... it's too random...
... But anyways about the "fuck toy" thing, Celestia is kinda exagerating... she's just gonna be flirting with Seamus a lot.
PS: Changed Seamus' "shy" description to sexually confused. Coz that's what he is towards anthro ponies. Trololol!
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Ah…so he is not wonder if he likes men or woman then? got it, anyway good story, I want to see what happen next, this look like a really funny sit com
As for Celestia appearing…'yeah to much honey, you are a pretty little mare but let us had something at the imagination, nice try though yeah, not big fan of the salsa buuuut you pull it quiet nicely'
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Normally, I'd say yes and take you up on that.
Unfortunately, college is taking up quite a lot of my time lately, and what little I have left is usually used in either my own story or video games.
...It's mostly the latter, sadly. So I can't in good conscience accept, as I'd likely just end up wasting your time with you waiting for me to get my act together. If at any point I do find myself with a foreseeable future of extra time, I will contact you again and see if you still require an editor.
4289285 Me to!
Oh my God, even MORE clop. Oh, not just any old clop, ANTHRO. It's as if you're trying to "spice up" your "sex life" by introducing furries. Just read something normal, guys.
Please.
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Ah, almost didn't recognize you with that new avatar.
Clever.
You know, I find it rather interesting that these generic clop-fics are so well received. I wonder why... Surely it isn't the ridiculously exaggerated (and saucy) cover-art! Lovely choice, by the way, Celestia would certainly be proud.
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"Once tainted by chaos, always tainted by chaos." Isn't that right, Commissar?
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Yes.
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Hm...
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*Raises Weapon*
'Those who follow Chaos, shall suffer for eternity.'
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no
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Yes.
4290144 Nope.
4289982 Yes, because that's what you tell people on a fanfiction site.
Do you also tell birds to stop flying so much, or fish to cease with all their annoying swimming?
Jesus Fucking Christ, my goddamn eyes. Atrocious grammar, blatantly obvious you didn't give the writing itself one single thought, and good fucking lord. I'd give some better constructive criticism than that, but honestly your giants walls of tell-y filled text made it nigh impossible to read anything.
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I'm still wondering how it's even anatomically possible for Celestia's back to support her breasts in the cover art.
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It's not. In reality, she would have extreme back pains and be unable to do a single thing. I still don't get why people have a fascination with massive boobs. Anything larger than a D is a major inconvenience to both partiess involved. And health issues for the female.
Stupid twits.
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Eeyup, and going through this artist's other works, it's mostly the exact same thing. I can't even tell the difference between some characters, they're all drawn the same.
John Perry Suffers the Featured Box, will fun this time...
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Magic!
Honestly... the grammar could use a bit of work, the idea is good, but... I dunno... Celestia seems a bit too much out of it at the moment... It's not that I can't see her getting rid of the royal shackles, just... that being that... oh, how to put it... "Just Out there"... seems a bit too far out of character for now. I'll definitely put this on my watch list and check it out as new chapters are added.
4289982 Dude, it just happens. Sometimes I wish we could magically erase opinions and parts of society we think are wrong, but unfortunately that's not how the world works.
4290477 Oh come on, they're not that- *looks again midsentence*- HOLY MOTHER OF MASTER CHIEF
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Dude/dudette everyone has a fetish. Some like anthros, some like cat-ears, others like plain ponies. I myself have a penchant for ropes. That being said, this is exactly the place where people can express their interests in their own ways.
Why do we need to judge or put down?
Doesn't make a lick of sense, especially the irrational ideas (why not cover herself with a spell instead of affecting the entire world?).
And I like it
4289982 Hey! You were on the other story spouting crap! Isn't that spamming!? You should be removed from this site. Why are you looking up these stories just to troll!? Do you even read them or do you just judge because of the rating? Spammer! Troll!
I think I pissed myself while my ass ran away laughing. Laughed too hard I guess!
nice, that is all I can say
...I haven't even read the story yet, but the fact that the title is referencing one of my favorite movies when I was growing up is enough for me to give you a like.
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Cookie...you want some clop...you want me to make some clop for you to be angry about?
Would that make you feel better?
4290487 oh my gosh! i literally just now noticed the correlation between your avatar and your name! i was always like "why is his avatar spongebob with a rainbow when his name is referencing some dude named bob?" But now i get it!
(blonde moment)
anyway that's enough of that, let's do a relative comment. I can't say this was the best written fic or the most orginal. But you know what, you took something you like, and you wrote it! That's what's up - have an upvote
How come I feel like that Celestia is actually Discord in disguise, then along with Seamus they have at some point rough carnal sex and at the end Discord reveals himself just before it ends, leaving the human roommate a mess.
I don't know, that's kinda off the top of my head.
This is a disgrace to Celestia and I do not like anthros. BUT I REALLY LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING... and the Emperor's New Groove in there was good too!
When I read the description and learned that the guy's name is Seamus. I immediately thought of Seamus 'SSoH' O'Doherty.
I know you made a big deal pointing out Celestia's changed personality, but it still bugs me a bit, especially when there was a way to solve the problem while leaving the story almost entirely intact: use Luna. Luna's personality was much less well-defined, to the point of her almost not having one. This makes her incredibly easy to write, as she can be whomever you want her to be. My interpretation of her is a fun-loving mare who enjoys pulling pranks, but gets deathly serious whenever someone's mental health is brought up, but she just as easily could be similar to Fluttershy without compromising really anything that happened in the show.