I see this story is set before the series began. I will keep an eye on this. BTW, is this the story that inspired you?

Like the person before me, this carries the vibes of In The Comfort of Her Majesty. Not a bad thing, really, but it is kind of obvious what your inspiration is for this story.

Still, not a bad thing. I liked that story and this one is off to a good start as well, so I'll stick around to see where it goes.

4404857 I have to disagree. This doesn't just carry the 'vibe' of Comfort... it is a straight up copy. The only differences are the irrelevant starter job, the names, and it's set a few years sooner. So far this has been: 'Hey let's rewrite Comfort with my OC, but I'll even give him the same backstory... because writing backstories is hard!!'

Frankly I am sorely tempted to just down vote this now as blatant plagiarism and walk away. But I suppose giving a couple more chapters of rope won't hurt me... my cynicism is already as high as it can go anyway.