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Visual Spectrum


I am a script writer as well as a story writer. I was born in 1996. I started writing when I was eight years old and have been writing ever since.

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Silver Spoon's parents have to leave for a business trip and could not take her with them. To make matters worse for Silver Spoon, Diamond Tiara is gone. She shows a different side of herself, one that no one knew. Sweetie Belle helps her to learn that she can do things on her own and don't need another pony to hold her hoof.


Cover Art created by ZekeOfTheFreaks

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

This was truly a nice short read indeed. Wonderful job on the writing. Great work on portraying Silver Spoon in a different light. I don't find anything wrong with this story and for it being your first, you did a really good job.

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Actually, this is not my first fanfiction. It is my first on here, though. Thank you, though. :pinkiehappy:

4375436 Your very welcome, wonderful story. :)

I'm honestly quite amazed. I really like where this story went.

This story needs more recognition! It's an interesting start, and could even start off a series! Silver Spoon learning about caring for herself, writing in the journal every day, and such.

what kind of parent leaves an 8 to 10 year old alone for a week with no food?:flutterrage:

Honestly I'm surprised her mother cared at all. I like the names for Mr and Mrs Spoon but they got to be the worst parents in Equestria!:unsuresweetie:

"Um... promise you won't tell anypony!" Silver Spoon begged.

Sweetie Belle nodded and said, "Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye." While doing the hoof gestures.

just started using her horn and already invoking POWERFUL Earth Pony magic!:pinkiecrazy:

A little rushed (and tragic that her parents would leave her like that) but otherwise I loved Silver's interaction with Sweetie and Rarity.:raritystarry:

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