Repentance

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He felt regret and he felt ashamed.
He did not deserve forgiveness so easily.

What will his friend Fluttershy say to him about it?

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daniboyi

daniboyi #1 · May 12th, 2014 · · ·

That was very sweet and cute ^^ good one-shot of Discord and Fluttershy

Specially Trained Derp

Specially Trained Derp #2 · May 12th, 2014 · · ·

A nice little extension to the mane episode :)
I hope we get to see more Discord in S5.

Chaos alien

Chaos alien #3 · May 13th, 2014 · · ·

Very we'll written and great!
Have a brohoof /)

DemonWriterX

DemonWriterX #4 · May 13th, 2014 · · ·

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Thank you ^_^
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Captain Burrito

Captain Burrito #5 · May 13th, 2014 · · ·

Wow...great story. Really.

And I wanted to congratulate you. It takes a lot of strength to stand up after you're made a grave mistake, even (especially) if people are forgiving you, and from your note it seems you did just that.

DemonWriterX

DemonWriterX #6 · May 13th, 2014 · · ·

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Thanks for you comment and yes and I hope that maybe the writers would do that sort of thing to Discord I mean I'm sure he will still feel a little bad of what he did even with forgiveness it might have even changed him, even if it's just a little.

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