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NightmareDash


"He's not a geek, he's a geek with combat skills. That's why the ladies love him." -Flashpoint

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This story is a sequel to The Lunar Apprentice


Celestia won. Her Royal Guards defeated Nightmare Moon and her army of rogue Lunar Guards. The Shadowbolts were driven underground, and the Lunar Apprentice is dead. And what has victory brought?

Hell.

The Elements of Harmony are separated and useless. The renegade forces of the New Lunar Republic are hidden in the shadows, free to move and strike at will. Confidence in Celestia's rule has been shaken throughout Equestria. Half the Royal Guard is out of commission, and the changeling army is on its way.

Every loose thread is being pulled on; it's only so long before the tapestry unravels.

Celestia may have won the battle, but she also unleashed the Night Terrors. And Equestria may not survive them.

Update 10/14/2015: Featured! Glad Night Terrors is proving to be as strong as its predecessor. A major thank you to all fans and followers!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 173 )

It's here! It's finally here! :yay:

Finally! It is here. I waited so long, well not that long, but anyway I limiet and I want more. But take your time, a good story is more important than that it is quick finished. But I am taling to much, good begin!

Oops, I like it instead of limiet and talking instead of taling.

I don't know why, but I think that Dash may not be dead. Then again, she might be. You never know.

I've missed this, I've missed this a lot.

5532419 I'm going for Asccended. Her blade survived that and in cannon Twilight Asccended because she made new magic. Rainbow could have done the same here.

I'm just gonna leave this here.

And this will be a nice addition.

Are you going to ever add anything?:applecry:Because, I think it's sounds quite interesting:pinkiecrazy:and I LOVE:heart:this story:pinkiehappy:I read The Lunar Aprentice, like, five times:twilightblush:so please please please please add more please:raritydespair:
It sounds good:yay:
So more please:pinkiesad2:

5830801 Writer's block has struck, I'm afraid. Trying to muddle through a lot of exposition/"Since last time...", as well as nail down a solid middle to the story. Lot of college-related distractions as well, but I definitely intend to make progress on this.

it's alive! holy shit i thought this was gone for good! nice to see it's still going strong, though!

I'm not really comfortable with Dash really wanting to kill the other mane 6. Just way too out of character for her.

And bummer i was hoping she ascended, so where did she go during the fight? You raised a huge question here.

Rainbow, I think you are forgetting villains rule number 236: Don't do things that conclude a relationship with a past friend, ever.

Huzzah, an update! As always, I love reading another chapter of this story. It seems Rainbow and the Shadowbolts have adopted a very interesting hideout. Nothing like a round of beers to celebrate the impending fall of an enemy. Can't wait for what follows!

5842091 i think she did the dissapearing speed magic thing that luna did back in the 1st story, just left the katana while doing it for dramatic effect

5864844 but that makes no sense. why break off the fight if Dash was known to be alive to Luna. They fight could have continued.

Sorry but this chapter has SEVERELY weakened the story. Dash should have either died, or accidently ascended.

5864868 as it says in there, she had to use the katana to break the beam, and if she didn`t them lunas shield would have broken.
this made her teleport due to her not being able to stay in the beam in case it failed

5865823 again why not continue the fight, she was okay so the fight could have continue the retreat was not nessecary

5865833 she was probably making herself look dead so that the others would be shocked when they saw her again, giving her more time to act.

the retreat was done by Luna as she thought rainbow had just died :/

5865855 Like I said this chapter has severely weaken the story and should be scrapped.

5865882 if it is scrapped then we lose part of the story, the story of the end of a great battle

who cares about logic??? it`s a fan fiction about a cartoon show that has magical talking ponies!!!

5865919 part of the story that weakens the story. THis can be done much better.

Not to mention Dash is WAY too dark in that chapter.

5865949 well, she did just join the dark side of the empires

about the "should be scrapped" thing, cartoon logic says that it shouldn`t :/

i listen to cartoon logic

5865982 Is it really the dark side though. Luna offered early in the fight to call off her guards if Celestia helped her with her goals. everypony who died after that are on Celestia's hooves.

The other elements are misguided and her real enemy is Celestia.

5866008 well, i gotta admit, celestia kinda came out evil on that story.
but a good fan fiction can do anything with the power of cartoon logic!!!

Hm, main events of Epilogue "The Lunar Apprentice" take place after 2 days since Battle for Canterlot.
My theory that at the moment when Dash disappeared she spontaneously teleported pretty far from Canterlot and when she at last find Luna and Shadowbolts, everypony think that Rainbow dead.
And I think that after her last meeting with Mane5, Dash of course see them as enemies, because they choosed Celestia over Luna and become traitors in her eyes.

this has been inactive for 1 month and 6 days :/

Thank you thank you
THANK YOU
I am sooooo glad that you updated this story
I thought you were going to end it for a second
Do do that:ajbemused:
It's good though :yay:
:heart:

5990836
1) i think you meant "don`t do that"
2) where have you been? did you only just finish the first and saw there was a sequel or did you just not check after the first chapter?

well, so much for going strong. still hoping this isn't gonna fizzle out.

I need MOAR!!!!!!

This is very nicely done, and I wonder where the changelings are gonna come in to place and how.

You can have some wonderbolt vs shadowbolt combat maybe and I don't know if you have the time to read it all, but I recommend calm wind's stories. It all takes place in the same timeline and the soarindash stories have some shadowbolt action, but I think you should at least read it until halfway/two thirds of flying sky-high to get some facts about what calm wind made of the shadowbolts. But I'll see what you are going to do with this story.

goes to library expects to see zero, sees one his eyes become big and he dies

well poor Cadance.

Luna you better have better control on that thing then the canon version.

Great. Luna and her ponies are doing their thing at just the wrong time, given what Chrysalis and her bugs are up to.:facehoof:

I'm beginning to wonder if Celestia, Luna, Rainbow, Twilight, and their respective bunches are gonna get their respective acts together before its too late?

I'm beginning to wonder.

6317801 maybe they're working together? you have to admit that the timing of it all is very convenient. not to mention that it's the kind of subtlety that Luna seems to favor. an old enemy once again manages to infiltrate the royal family, using the princesses niece, who uses the captain of the guard as a puppet. that would be crushing.

either something like that, or Luna knows about the changelings, and has already created countermeasures for them. i doubt the changelings are aware of the grand design behind the 'terrorist attacks,' so that would make Luna the one holding all the cards.

6318164 Hmmm, well put, and a most interesting hypothesis.

I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens next, huh?

6318215 hopefully not to long, though, you know?

6318609 Oh, I absolutely agree with you there, as I'm on pins and needles to find out what happens next!:twilightoops:

Always a treat to find this story in my feed :rainbowkiss:

This was great :pinkiesmile: Though I hope that there is a light at the end of this tunnel I really hate the means Luna is using to get her end :pinkiesad2: I'm wondering if when the Changelings attack is when balance is finally restored to Equestria, and both Celestia and Luna's forces work together. :unsuresweetie: I WANT MOAR SOON! :flutterrage: If that is alright with you. :fluttershyouch:

You asked me why I was here; the answer is I'm here to defect.

Truth?

Or Trick?

I'm leaning toward trick ... as in infiltration.

Don't trust her, guys!

(I'm truly sorry about this and will probably regret it later but I'm desperate)

HEY, you remember the guys that did fighting is magic (but got cease and desisted by Hasbro)?
No?
Meh. Keep reading anyways.
They're currently working on its spiritual successor "fightin herds" with Lauren Faust as a team member.
They're also crowd funding on indiegogo and even if you cant donate i know they'd love it if you could show support.
Check it out ( https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/them-s-fightin-herds#/ )

and here's there site for those interested http://www.mane6.com/

We have Changelings, the equivalent of my Mutalist panic settling in, terrorists, a dream-hopping demon and revolutionists. Celestia doesn't stand a chance.

Celestia you could have prevented all of this by willing to let Luna try her idea's. All of this is your fault.

6528140 it better be otherwise I'm out.

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