Memories are to be cherished.
To be kept in heart, no matter what.
In the case of a forgotten one, don't worry. It will make its way back to you in a short time.
Rainbow dash replays memories in her head of her past life.
Other characters than RD and PP are mentioned.
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my sincerest of apologies for the spelling mistakes and other errors,
but mostly I am sorry that this was such a shot story.
And also that ponies died in it.
I never know if the story I write is going to be sad or happy, I just pick up a pencil and write.
And das how I do it.
A pretty touching narrative. I found it unnecessary to mention that RD and PP were not in a romantic relationship, especially not twice. Anyway, the grammar could be a lot better, but the meat of your story, its shortness, its bittersweetness, and all that is very nice. Good job, but before you write anything else, work on your grammar. Seriously, though, good show.
Story:
*Sniff* That was BEAUTIFUL!
Grammer:
*Sniff* That was HORRIBLE!
jk
It was only not very good,not horrible!
Ok and now the moment of silence:
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I understand. I really do. My grammar and my mistakes are really bad.
I need an editor or something.
Anypony out there?