When civil war breaks out in the Griffon Kingdom, Equestria does what the Princesses decide is best- maintain a policy of isolation and observe. Unfortunately, such plans almost never fall through without complications, and an attack on Equestrian soil forces the ponies to take a side. Nimbus and his squadron are swept up into the gathering storm, but the pony soon finds himself questioning whom he can and cannot trust. For in war, nothing is always as it seems...
Whooooo! Sequel to the sequel!
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So if you've already read chapter one of Wings of Deceit, I feel I should apologize. In my hasty attempt to juggle dinner and publishing I forgot to publish my prologue. Whoops. Enjoy the story's "lost" 600 words!
4524481 Not a problem, just read the prologue...
Glorious.
A shame some asshole downvoted it though...
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Funnily (I think that's a word) enough, I've had exactly one downvote on all my previous works, too. I wonder if it's the same person...
Maybe it is, maybe it isn't. I dunno. I just wanted a chance to use the "suspicious" Trixie emoticon, and such an opportunity has finally presented itself! HUZZAH!
Right, I should probably get back to writing now...
I look forward to more, more, more!
Another good story-building chapter.
I like it!
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I should really just not bother making these posts, since they aren't obeyed anyway, but if you downvote this story, would you mind leaving some critical feedback? I can't improve unless I know what to fix. Probably speaking to an empty room, but I believe it's just common courtesy to explain why you don't like something you took the time to read.
Okay, rant for the day is done.
Ooooo, quite a bit on Nimbus' life. Awaiting your next chapter eagerly.
I like the new chapter. I'll have another!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Screw that First, it's useless.
Anyway.... Smart ideas... (which I shall not mention to avoid spoiling)
And also, I'm bad at popping up cunning tricks. How long did it take for you to get these ones out?
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Depends on the cunning trick. This chapter's been in my head for a while. I wasn't sure whether to spring it on the audience early or late, but it seems like early's worked out better. That said, I had it planned since last summer. Don't worry about Anonymous Poster, by the way. He's one of my good friends being funny. I'm trying to convince him to start writing his own stories. Perhaps one day I'll be successful.
And in other news, the next chapter will be out this week. I'm on a schedule, I've organized things, and I have motivation again!
*tears in eyes*
Screw you
Back?
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I think so, and for good this time! The snowball is rolling, and that snowball will...
be...
ME!
Okay, I was really struggling with that analogy. Anyway, I'm back!