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Heart Felt
I'm just some little filly who happens to like coming up with stories and sometimes reading other pony's stories.
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A certain dragon is heartbroken somewhere.
Not bad, a little basic, but not bad at all. My only minor complaint is that Twilight didn't return the favor. This seems strange as she spends practically the whole story thinking about how amazing Rarity is (which is not a bad thing, I liked that actually). It just seems like Twilight should want to reciprocate.
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I tried to keep it a little simple because like I said, it was my first time trying to write something like this. But yeah, I see what you mean about Twilight. Honestly I don't ship this much at all and I just chose the pony to be on top at random. Perhaps I should have thought about it a little more. Maybe I could have a follow-up chapter where in the morning Twilight pays her dues?
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That's how it goes with any ship with Rarity that doesn't include Spike, unfortunately for the little dragon.
That would be nice, and it makes sense as Rarity said she was exhausted before Twilight could really have made the offer anyway. So yeah, doing that in the morning would make sense.