*Formerly called "Asylum" (Changed to avoid confusion with another story that is probably way better than mine called "Asylum")
Captain Ghost Chaser has a secret obsession with cases of mental breakdowns and madness, especially when it comes to the famous ex-princess, Twilight Sparkle. After being transferred to the Equestrian Asylum for the Criminally Insane, his secret obsession leads him down a path of terrifying encounters, secrets, and a fear that just might drive him right into the care of the very Institution he is tasked with guarding and regulating.
Chapters (4)
why use word "Fetish" in description
if no clop
(Interesting premise though. Looks like something King would write without the whole outside-looking-in thing.)
*Tips hat* Hello, my good sir. In the marker for an editor? You got this by yourself? Ok.
If this is an asylum, why are there military personal stationed there?
4567911 cause it is a place where superhuman beings ar eheld including a mentally unstable alicorn?
Hmm. I'd suggest that you change/alter the name of your story, since there is already a well-known story called Asylum: i.imgur.com/Hwnd4sB.png
Mostly so people don't accuse you of trying to rip off the other story's success or anything.
4567911 I have no idea, maybe the insane ex-princess alicorn.
4568578 think about any pony with their heads on crooked would be rathre dangerous.
So I'm guessing this story is a direct sequel to this.
Never understood what's so fun about being flipping insane. The tossing off of inhibitions is nice, but rolling around and pissing yourself all the time sort of ruins that. Plus being locked in solitary all day; I don't care how insane you are that's just boring as heck.
It's kind of annoying that the guard thinks "finds crazy people fascinating" will get him locked in a maximum security cell down in subbasement B. You gotta kill a few more villages using only a rusty spoon before you earned that kind of committment right next to Twilight Sparkle. I would almost keep up with this story, just to see the look on his face when going cuckoo and killing that Chains guy just ends up with him in a minimum security facility miles away, amid pleasant green pastures with a lovely view of Canterlot.
Trixie would totally be his guard.
"Maximum security? What are you gonna do, blow the place up with your horn?"
4573167 Didn't say he would get locked up with Twilight for having such a fetish ;) But c'mon, if you were secretly obsessed with Adolf Hitler, how do you think people would react? That's more or less what's going down with him.
Thanks for reading anyways, I hope you'll check out more, but you went this far, and I'm grateful.
-TBK
Wait, if Ghost Chaser is a unicorn, why did he use a flashlight in Chapter 2?
Wouldn't that be unnecessary?