Based on the movie Edge of Tommorow (Which I haven't watched yet)*
This story has mature words even though it is stated as Teen because as you know, Teens these days start swearing a lot, so yeah.
Frontier Wing, an ordinary pegasus, finds himself in an odd predicament as he has to relive the same day over and over until he stops this new threat along with The Mane Six. However, each day will be different with something new in store and only he will remember the events of the 'Previous' day. Will he succeed? Will he fail? Who knows? Find out when you read Edge of Equestria!
*=To elaborate, this uses the concept in which the hero relives the same day over and over until he defeats the threat or solves the problem or something.Anyway,enjoy!
Oh yeah, can anyone give me cover art, thanks.
Your indents are driving me nuts.
And saying that it's based off of Edge of Tomorrow (which I actually saw) wouldn't actually mean much unless it took some points from that movie other than 'character dies, relives day'. You might as well say this was based off of the idea of Hard Reset. Or even Groundhog Day.
Live ... Die ... Retry ... Live ... Die ... Retry ... Live ... Die ... Retry ... Liv...
Oh come on guys, this movie is just awesome.
Glad to see someone make it a crossover.
Ok, personally, I think you got the concept down, but you really need to work on your story telling. Firstly, you're trying too hard to keep the story moving. What you need to do is subtly work your way to the big reveal. An example of this from Edge of Tomorrow is once Tom Cruise's character dies the first time, he dies several more times before he talks to Emily Blunt's character where they reveal whats happening to him. Each time he dies brings him a step closer to saving her, thus telling her that he's doing what she herself once did. Second, the whole thing with him having this ability all of a sudden with no initial catalyst is, to be blunt, extremely dumb. What you need is something that gives him the ability to restart the day. The way they did it in Edge of Tomorrow was tom cruise's character being covered in the blood of a special Mimic as it and him die. The last thing I'm gonna comment on is your grammar. Dude. You seriously need to find an editor. That's all I'm gonna say, since that's all I really see thus far. I'll say more if I notice more.
Onwards and Upwards!
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4579367 It's not much of a crossover rather than based of the idea.
4579889 Thanks!
When I have the time, I'll try to rewrite it.
I think this is the only story like this online. Please continue it