I wasn't happy with my life by a long shot, but I wasn't so unhappy I would kill myself. But then why am I laying here with a knife beside me, and my wrist cut open? Was my depression really that bad? And what is that laughter in my head? Why does it taunt me by offering a happier life when I know it's only a trick? But then again, what do I have to lose if I accept the offer?
Too emoerotic for my tastes.
CRAAAAAAAWLING IIIIIIIIIIIN MY SKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN
THESE WOOOOOOUNDS THEY WILL NOT HEEEEEAAAAAL
4625620 sucks for you
Such angst.
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What did you expect when the main character is suffering from depression, and goes to a world were they just had an attack by a magic sucking centaur?
14 dislikes and only 5 comments. Could someone at least tell why they don't like?
Don't remind me of THAT... my mind is scarred enough as it is!
4630972 And yet you didn't see it coming when you read that this story has the Dark tag.
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I know, but I didn't expect to be that! *(curls into ball and weeps)*
4632235 Well, welcome to the real world where not everything is rainbows and sunshine. Also welcome to the introduction of dark stories for this fandom, as what I did is far more tame than what I've read.
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... but I like this story anyway, ignore the haters.
4632348 I'll let you in a little secret, this chapter will be one of the more darker ones. After it will start to lighten up, also I plan on ignoring them. As long as at least one person wants to read it, this story will continue.
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I'll keep tabs on it on my read later list, don't want to favourite it yet.
Well I for one am absolutly loving this story, athough I am dissapointed that Im not able to fix all these mistakes... all well, it cant be helped. Also Carly says Hi. You may not hear back from me
4660328 Oh, good to hear from ya. Hope you can join the land of the internet again soon. Tell Carly I said hi, and also don't worry soon a dark rose will sprout in this story as well.
Hey this is a great story, I hope you are able to finish this, but I hope you take your time as well. Good Luck.
Its pretty sad and good story i fell bad for they guy but are you still making chapters flr or did u stop (plzz dont abonded this story)
7374841 There are a few reasons why I put this story on hiatias. 1. at the time I had many stories going on and had to put them on hold including this one. 2. at the time I didn't feel like people liked the story and wanted to give some time before starting it again. But no this story is not cancelled, but it'll probably be a bit before I get back to it.
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