I've never been one for intro's so I'll just tell you straight off...
I'm a human, or WAS until that sack of crap discord sent me to this forest, fending for myself until Zecora took me to see her friends. It's all fine and dandy until they all start freaking out because I'm sooooo different. You'd think that such a pastel covered train wreck that once was a girl's painting canvas would be a little more accepting Nd tolerant but it's really not! I was lucky they didn't immediately run me out of town.
Long story short, I left and I'm gonna explore this place, apparently there's a number of rebellions going on so I'll have to be careful but I just wanna get back home to my family, and I'll do whatever it takes...
Chapters (4)
So far I'm really enjoying the concept. It's nice to see someone actually writing a not-so-typical HiE fic. There were a few grammatical errors, but they didn't distract me from the story at all. Keep up the good work. I anticipate further updates.
430613 thankin yer kindly
I'll work on the grammar as much as I can but bear in mind that my iPhone seems to want to write the story for me
I LOVE this!
I hope there is a point in this story where Woods goes to Hoofington and discovers it's a Chavtown.
Seriously, this stuff is funny. One of the few stories where you have a sort of genuine human-pony interaction that includes many WTF moments.
One thing I found odd: Woods' tail. What means this? Definitely haven't seen any stories with tailed humans yet. Kinda cool, actually.
Thank you and I'm not going to spoil it now.
I could go on and on about character design but I'm worried about the pacing of the story, I don't want it to feel too rushed yet at the same time drawl on for ages. So ANY criticisms you have would be really appreciated
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Humans are better with tail. I want one too.
Good story bro
>>rasta-gringo
Agreed! Tails ftw.
I lost it at "'Rapey Dave'".
about 7 spelling errors, do you want me to fish em out, or do you got this?
That was some of the funniest I have ever read
436429I got this bro, thanks for the heads up, this phone just wants to messs with me.
i leik were dis is goin!
PS if this is canceled i will cry until i die
Interesting and humorous. Though the conversation really feels kinda fast-paced. Like they're reading a script rather fast, try to put some spaces or some descriptions between them, break them up a bit.
I seriously feel like I'm missing something here. Its good, the story, but feels like its moved waaaay to fast. Try slowing it down? perhaps? Other than that it's a fun read :D
440446 haha will do bro
I really wanted to get Woods out of Ponyville but I guess I'm gonna have to keep him there for another chapter or two 
But if he stays too long he'll grow attached to the mane 6
but hey, what can you do?
... There are some things you just can't control
440570 Mmm guess so? I dunno something just felt wrong with the pacing... the relationship development speed perhaps? *Musing noises*
Honestly don't worry about that, it's all based off of first impressions. Twilight is just an open character, I mean she wasn't hesitant of Zecora until fake evidence was presented and she's used to making friends now. I can't be having them too attached if he's gonna be traveling
but I see what you mean, one minute Woods is fighting in the forest and the next he's chewing twilight 
I think I've got the pacing under control ;) thanks for the heads up
Honestly don't worry about that, it's all based off of first impressions. Twilight is just an open character, I mean she wasn't hesitant of Zecora until fake evidence was presented and she's used to making friends now. I can't be having them too attached if he's gonna be traveling
but I see what you mean, one minute Woods is fighting in the forest and the next he's chewing twilight 
I think I've got the pacing under control ;) thanks for the heads up
I was actually wondering if you were going to develop this interest Zecora seems to have with Woods any further, seeing her act in such an… energetic way around him has me interested in where that will lead.
446570 my guess, it's the same fascination twilight has if you know what I mean, I.e a new species that is friendly... Discovery of the century
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Ah, that makes sense in some ways, but on the other hoof, she wanted to go collecting fireflies with him. Seems like a little more than an academic interest, but maybe I'm just reading too much into it…
448315 I imagined it to be a friendly gesture more han anything :) same way rarity takes fluttershy to the spa. It's just something they've come to do together. ALTHOUGH I've only started, I'll write it as it comes
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Well, you ARE the author, I wouldn't expect it to work any other way.
RAPEY DAVE IS NO LAUGHING MATTER HE RAPES YOU THEN STEALS YOUR SOCKS
Awesome fight!!.
Epic finish!!.
Lyra!!.
What more do you need!?.
Just to say I'm REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY sorry for the delay. It seems that my mother has had surgery on her spine and my father is hundreds of miles away on a job so I have to play parent for my two toddler brothers. I've got help from grandma now so I can try and get back to writing but it won't be on a fixed schedule. Another thing... Thank you for all the positive feedback from all you bronies out there. It's a massive morale boost for me especially at times like this and it always brings a smile to my face reading your work, laughing at the humor or crying at my little dashie.
I know many won't read this but I'd like to say it anyway for those who will...
Thank you
Welcome back! I thought this one had been abandoned. I look forward to reading MOAR!
Hope your mom's gets well soon.
This is awesome. Can't wait to see what's next.
I hope your mother is doing well, and good luck with those brothers of yours. I know your feel, bro.
Nice to see you back!
Hope everything works out and your mother gets well soon
Thank you
all of you, it means a lot to me and it just shows how nice the brony community is
thanks guys.
987758 anytin' for a fellow Brony! We keep each other company. Although I don't watch my little pony. I can't cause I have 4 siblings, two TV's with direct tv, and an annoying ass brother. But I do read my little pony fanfictions and here on my IPod. At least I still have some privacy. Anyway...
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Luna is best pony!
Sorry just had ti put that in there. I have seen 2 my little pony episodes. The first was the one where Pinky takes care of Pound and Cake the twins. And the other was the one with Rainbow Dash freaks out about the cider.
157 weeks ago.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FUCK.