Story Description:
Twilight and her friends decide to watch shooting stars one night.
One star passes... and then another.... and then another...
Twilight is convinced that the one she saw didn't necessarily just pass over... but that it actually fell.
She doesn't want to discuss this ridiculous sentiment with the girls - or Spike - at least not just yet. But then something starts to take place in her head she can't help but investigate; bringing Spike along with her.
The fallen star is not at all what anypony would expect.
And what she discovers about a certain Draconequus could change her view on him, forever.
Story Note:
So for those who would not have guessed, this story contains a good bit of creative head canon; just a heads up.
+This takes place anytime before Twilight became an alicorn
Extras:
The beautiful cover art was created by Steelforcer, Deviant Art
Nice
Finally its done I liked the ending the most
Are you making a second chapter?
ABOUT TIME!
Star Fall what a nice name
Are you going to be putting your stories out every Friday?
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
5122418 Aww thanks! Mee to!
BTW: It's not done yet. I got it out late, since it was supposed to be finished but... It's not. It was supposed to be an OS, but... it's not.
5122428 Yes, yes I am.
5122456 So... what?
5122444 No... I would like to put a story or chapter out every Thursday... y'know, since that's what I did last week - that's what day I started on.
5122440 Thanks!!
But you know? It hit me, just like that, when I thought about the idea, so... Yup. XD
5122434 Yeah...
I like how it's turning out so far, and you should get a pre-reader and editor on this so that the full potential of this story can be realized.
That is all.
5122735 Thanks; I'll consider it.
This seems interesting. But, on my part, I can't keep up. Apologies.
5123660 Er... that's alright?
Was something wrong?
5123694 No not at all! I just didn't understand it in my readthrough.
5126187 Oh, well... I'm sorry for that...
Hopefully I didn't confuse anypony else!
Would this be good for the Badass Twilight group?
Excellent interplay between Spike and Twilight in this. You used Spike well, acting a a counter-weight to Twilight, but also orbiting her and supporting her. Very well done!
"Bizarre," not "bazar," though, and there are more than a handful of grammar errors that need to be fixed, but good overall.
5127227 Thank you so so much!!
I am bit of an amateur so I did not really realize that that's what I did...
May be -- to save space here - you could explain in a message to me?
5126683 If you're asking me, I'd say no.
I love this story. I hope for more chapters to show up. You did a very nice job with the idea of the story, and the part about the Windigos is a lovely touch to the story as well, seeing as how the very idea wasn't mentioned in the actual MLP show. I think its marvelous how you thought of that by yourself. Really out done yourself!
5287798 Wow, thanks!
I owe a good bit to Dumb who really helped me spruce things up!
I'm actually starting to like the story, a bit, too!
Update! Very nice
5319584 Thanks a lot!!
This is one great story, keep going! I want to know what happens next!
5662214 Thank you very much!
But if you didn't read my bio then you might want to.
I will be inactive (as for as story or chapter postings go) for quite a while....
I expect to return, soon, but not now.
I truly appreciate your enjoyment of this; stick around if you care too.
It's one of the first I'll be updating, on my return.
5662237
I shall await your return with great anticipation for the next chapter!
5662261 Wonderful!