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Majin Syeekoh


We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.

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Twilight Sparkle meets a Paper Alicorn for the first time, with disastrous results.


I'd like to thank Flint Sparks for prereading this!

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Best. Idea. Ever.

OMG Syeekoh. You should be named Psyykoh instead.
God damnit. :facehoof:
Have a thumb.
*CV walks away, muttering and shaking his head*

The paper alicorn deserved it.

I mean, really. How do you survive when you're made of paper? Especially when you've been underwater.

Is the pony planet so hospitable that something made of paper can survive?

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Eh, they lived in a library which protected them from the environment.

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You don't know what paper ponies live in. Don't hate. :fluttershysad:

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Well they would be exposed to the environment.

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They can repel prospective predators by giving them paper cuts. Everything in the Everfree knows not to fuck with the papercorns.

4738008 Consider this. You said planet, not a specific area. :rainbowkiss:

The Land of Ooo is much more dangerous than Equestria.
Post-apocalyptic world with magic that runs on radiation > Fantasy world with magic that runs on friendship

I want to play Paper Mario now.

A funny plot twist would have been if, Celestia said she used to be paper too if not for Discord. This so needs a chapter 2.

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Papercorns! Hahaha. :rainbowlaugh:

Make this a full story and I'll like fav and wat h you. Make it a full story do it for it do it!

So the alicorbs name is paper and the island is name paper?

Jello welcome to paper island , my name is paper, and this is paper, and this is paper, and that's Tom!

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-eats apple-

ooh, flinty preread this.

Neeyar is surprisingly well-developed for a two-dimensional character.

This... wat.
This is awesome :rainbowlaugh:

Your story is short and you should feel short!

and with that out of the way, great story. I'm going to read this to my friends. I would love to see a sequel, but this seems pretty complete, no need for a sequel.

After this incident, it will be hard to get the paper Alicorns back in the fold.
Good story.

4742553 I see what you did there :ajsmug:
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4801765 :raritywink:

Also, 4761564, I see what you did there. :rainbowlaugh:

EDIT. Fixed.

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4806674 Thanks. Fixed.

4806692 this feels like a concept from a game:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft::raritystarry: INFAMOUS SECOND SON mabey

Oh Twilight, you will probably never change. Thank goodness.

Why does that alicorn look like the alicorn on this story? (https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198245/folder/7423/fallout-equestria)

EDIT:Why does that alicorn look ly Nyx from Pen Stroke.

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