The Abyss
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Oh my god, the moment you posted this story, I thought it had something to deal with bukakke.
IT WAS AMBIGUOUSLY WORDED AND YOU WRITE THOSE KIND OF THINGS. THE CHAPTER TITLE DOESN'T HELP. Sorry, playing too much Borderlands 2.
My one complaint is that it ended too soon.
That was a fun read. I'll upvote and favorite this!
Hi, I'm Applejack. And welcome to Jackass!
All I could think of while reading this.
Hehe, cute.
On a side note, do expletives bump the rating up any? Just wondering.
Loved it!
You my good sir get a mustache
"Apple Bloom" is two words. At least you were consistent.
What an awesome way to make a living, selling your own dung. Also, this may be a little vulgar for an everyone rated story.
This was cute and funny. I shall favorite and like.
KBO.
Somepony needs a bath.
4817356 Eh, true, I took the word shit out.
4817370 NOOO!!! PROFANITY IS GOOD!!
Dash's vengeance shall be absolute.
In regards to the cover art, is it just me or does anyone else just LOVE AJ with that scarf?
Oh wow. Someone is being a massive dick and down voting everyones comments... Wait, I take that back; they are being a little worthless dick since that is both what they are and have for doing that. Calling them a massive one would be a compliment they do not deserve and would probably like.
This was pretty good. I liked it.
*Reads AJ's idea*
You evil mare! That's brilliant!
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It happens. Don't let it get to you.
Woo! Night owls for the win!
Did someone seriously go in the comments and dislike 14 of them in a row? >.<
Lmao! That was fantastic!
Haven't read it yet and it already sounds hilarious.
4817356 It can be spelled either way. Even Hasbro has used both (though they use 'Apple Bloom' more).
4817227 Lol you didn't look at the rating? Silly pone.
4817305 Haha, yeah, that'd be pretty funny, especially if someone wrote a story like that.
4817310 That's a good question. To be honest, I'm gonna say no, primarily because the moderator approved it without saying anything about it, and on top of that, the characters from the show use their own expletives, like ponyfeathers and horseapples.
4817313 Great!
4817357 Yeah, and a good one at that!
4817473 And smelly.
4817513 Aj does look pretty smashing with that scarf
4817579 Lol they can waste their time downvoting comments. It just shows that they have nothing better or more productive to do than to hit a tiny little button that doesn't mean anything.
but ... Eeeewww!!
"Huh, that sounds like something to read."
*clicks, then shuffles to blog updates tab*
"Oh, the Abyss posted two new stories--"
*realizes one of them is this*
*clicks Read Later*
That was great!
The work of Applejack will not be overlooked!
You get a favorite and a like from me my good sir.
It's all right, I guess. I don't think the payoff at the end is really worth the story, though. For me, it wasn't funny enough to be a comedy. It wasn't a slice-of-life, either. It was just kinda blah.
4817305 That actually reminds me of the Poo Cocktail Supreme.
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Yes, yes they did.
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That's exactly what I was thinking of!
A like and follow for the story.
looking forward to the update of I'll and the new twidash
You kind of gave away the punchline in the summary.
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4822718 Lol thanks for the heads up. I guess that's what I get for writing, editing, and publishing this all in one go haha.
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>TFW it is secretly Abyss downvoting comments
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While it could be possible, it isn't since you can't downvote yourself
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I have better things to do than hit a button that means nothing.
I love the interactions these two have. They have so much chemistry.
I'd have rather broken my back than fallen into cow crap, though...
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Yeah, I know. But imagine those people that really do spend their time doing that. Pretty meaningless life, really.
Oh Celestia, Rainbow!!!
The only words I have for this story: holy crap!
4818168 Serial comment-downvoting jerks have been plaguing the site for a while now. Since downvoting comments is meaningless, well...they're just proving how empty and meaningless their lives are.
4834078 True that lol. So, like what, they have absolutely nothing better to do other than disliking comments on some my little pony fanfiction? hahaha
4834082 Sad and awkward, isn't it? The worst part is, there are so many people on this site with pointless, empty lives that the trolls breed like parasprites.
4834089 Yeah, it is kinda sad when I know for a fact that any of them could easily write, draw, or create something, anything really. Hell, everyone has the ability to do something, so yeah, it is kinda sad to see them waste their lives in such a pointless manner.
4817305 *giggles like an idiot*
You, sir, get a
