After the fall of the Crystal Empire and the tragic Wedding of Princess Cadence and Shining Armor, Both King Sombra and Queen Chrysalis' whereabouts are unknown, same as the fate of the changelings even though some of them survived and could be seen once in a while.
They say that King Sombra became an outcast, regaining his power each day but may not recover from the nightmare Princess Luna gave him and Queen Chrysalis? She might be in the marshes, going around trying to find her changelings and regain power as well, seeking revenge.
No one really knows what will happen between the 2 villains when they meet.
Will they be friends or foes? or will they be more than friends, maybe the perfect evil couples?
Chapters (1)
In the description. For is redundant.
I am going to guess you are not really experienced but i didnt mind that much. The assumption of each other being a villain by looks falls under the common rule of "Show don't tell". Other than that i believe their love is on the borders of reasonably fast. Will this continue? Its marked as complete. I am interested in more i say.
The storyline for this is great! I'm not sure if it really is complete, or if you just forgot to change the thingie when you made this. There were quite a few grammar mistakes, but no worries, I'd be happy to proofread it for you.
More plz
The idea is great! You just need to brush up on some grammar. I recommend getting a proofreader, and I hope you continue this story as it doesn't seem like its dinised.
Everyone, thanks for reading.
about the grammar, ill try to fix that
the 2nd chapter will be done soon