Bonus Ducks! (Extra Chapter/Omake)
Chapter Duck
The group of mares watched as Twilight finally walked out, having spent all her breath yelling about how great an annoyance and frustration this afternoon had been. She never had to deal with an argument that was so one sided despite history regarding the topic.
Spike, after several politely requests, and one or two thinly veiled threats, left the pool and followed after her.
Rainbow Dash was at the window and once she saw Twilight walk over the hill, turned to the others.
“Alright, all clear.”
With a sigh of relief and a few chuckles, the group of mares burst into flames. Standing in the room were five changelings. They were laughing and hoof-bumping each other.
“Ha ha! Did you see the look on her face?”
“I know right? I was sure she was going to burst into flames!”
“Kevin was right, these ponies are crazy!”
“In a good way.”
“Yeah!”
“Do you think we over did it?”
“Nah! I mean someone had to knock her down a few pegs. Did you hear what she called us?”
“Scummy love suckers.”
“Pssh! Figures.”
“To be fair, their capital did get invaded.”
“So? We didn’t have anything to do with that. And anyway, a prank is a prank.”
One of them was looking around, poking some of the furniture.
“Say, did anyone make sure Fluttershy was out before coming here?”
One at the couch raised his hoof. “Right here! I saw her leave for the store.”
“How long ago was it?”
“Uh….”
There was a pause.
“Two hours ago?”
“Wait, two hours ago? Does that mean she’s likely to be here any-”
They heard the front door open. They looked over to the door and saw Fluttershy standing there, staring at the five changelings in her room. One on her couch, another on the ceiling, another with a duck on his head, one with an afro, and another in a box. They looked at her. She looked at them. They all stood staring.
“Uh,” The one in the box spoke. “Quack?”
Fluttershy squealed and fainted on the spot, stiff as a board.
“...”
The changeling on the ceiling looked to his compadres. “Bail?”
They nodded. “Bail!”
They promptly hustled out of the cottage, leaving the fainted pegasus to wake up after a few minutes.
“What...oh my did I just see...”
Fluttershy looked around, noticing she was thankfully alone.
“Oh dear. I thought for sure I saw a bunch of those scary changelings in here.” The pegasus breathed a sigh of relief, gathering up the groceries that had spilled from her saddlebags and heading into the kitchen to store her purchases. By chance she looked out the window, pausing as she noticed the scene in the backyard.
“Wait, why is the pool full of toys, and boats, and floats...and is that a tiki bar in the center?”
Now completely confused, the pegasus walked out into her backyard, staring at the impromptu party set up, complete with freshly made exotic drinks.
“Was Pinkie planning to throw me a party? But, it’s not my birthday or anything...” Fluttershy paused as she heard someone knocking at the front door. She quickly dashed back inside her cottage and opened the door to receive her second shock of the day.
“Wha...P-Princess Celestia?” The pegasus gasped at the sight of her diarch, staring at her with a confused expression.
“Good evening Fluttershy,” Celestia responded. “I just got an alarmingly strong worded letter from Twilight that you’ve had a changeling in your pool today. Could you, perhaps, talk to me about that?”
“Changeling?” She asked her eyes widening as she connected the dots between the changelings she thought she saw in her house, as well as the pool toys and party supplies littering the area.. “Oh my...”
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Poor Flutters!
Good thing I saw this in the update feed. XD
Didn't think you would actually do it!
One thing keeps bugging me, we never got to know what kind of work the Changeling had been doing before going to the pool.
That was the only thing important, besides that this is just uptight vs chill attitudes given the preconception of the intentions behind the apperance of an stereotypical foreigner in an unusual place.
Something that is been done to dead by this point.
Anyway, can't wait for the sequel, "Excuse me sir, there is a Changeling in my soup."
~Leonzilla
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Can I have my sides back sir I think I lost them laughing
I wish I could give the bonus chapter it's own thumbs down. I did not like it.
Oooooh this was beautiful!
Strange how this bonus chapter gave me a notification in my E-mail, even though I never marked this story as "Tracking". Still, it's a nice little romp.
Damn and I thought the original only chapter was silly.
okay I admit I'm a little bit dissapointed in them being Changelings.
This chapter's title had me smiling and imagining Merasmus saying it over and over.
Thank you so much for this.
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featured again
I can say this story was a vary good read and super fun.
if any thing you have a story hear that would be so easy to expand and just let it run, defiantly worthy of more.
Hahaha ooooh... oooh man, this was funny XD
Nice!
*In Times are a Changeling.*
You know, Twilight, I think you're a species-ist.
... A what? Spike?
A species-ist. You think Changelings are naturally evil when they're not.
Uh... Spike, I have good intentions to believe that-
There was Kevin at Fluttershy's pool, Gerald during Cranky Doodle and Matilda's wedding, and we have Thorax now. I think you're a species-sit.
I really need to watch my actions.
Or build a wall.
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Actually, Kevin was the one at Matilda's wedding.
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2015/11/the-changeling-from-slice-of-life-has.html
7893603 Well... Would ya look at that
Plot twist: Celestia is also a Changeling!
Ah, the space duck. Such a majestic creature.
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Shhh!
Not so loud! Everypony will want one!
7894996 Actually I was thinking of Dragons drinking soup when I came up with that title.
Just imagine a fancy Dragon in a fancier Dragon restaurant ready to drink from his gigantic bowl of soup when he happens to spot a Channeling, of all things, casually swimming in his soup without a care in the world. The little intruder slowly causes all the Dragons in the restaurant start to gather up to stare at it with mixed reactions ranging from perplexed to intrigued and then proceeded to bicker with each other about what they should do with it.
~Leonzilla
7893939 I was thinking the same thing when Celestia showed up. "Hi Fluttershy, I've been hearing reports of changlings appearing in ponies' houses and pools around here. I'm well aware of the problem, so you don't need to go telling anyone else about this, and next time you see me I'll pretend like I don't remember this."
Heh, I definitely enjoyed this story, especially the part where "Pinkie" decided to throw a pool party for Kevin!
but there is no third chapter to resolve this, please make a third one.
I think I preferred the original ending.
Well played, changelings, well played.
Aaaah, a space duck, what a majestic creature.
7893939 I expected Pinkie Pie to not be a changeling.
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Whats worse is that theres a CHANGELING WHO CAN IMITATE PINKIE PIE VERY WELL!
Just leave the adorable little changeling in the pool
I just notice something not right...Do Spike is a changeling too? Because it seem only 5 Changeling flee from Fluttershy's cottage....If he is really a Changeling....Than, we still have Changeling in the pool...
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We're reaching new levels of subterfuge.
and theres a zombie on your lawn.
Yes.
Season 2 Twilight
Lol love it