'The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing...' - Edmund Burke... When a Marine finds himself stuck in Equestria, what kind of adventures will he be brought along? Will he find himself again?
Hm... Can't say that I'm disappointed with this development. I'm impressed as it has taken a solid step above your previous writings. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I also currently don't have the energy to argue my little nitpicks. That will come at a later time.
Thanks for your comments guys! It's be a while, and I forgot to put the story on hold. Well, even though that was a small chapter, I felt that I needed to get out a small portion of my new, more thoughtful writing process. Also, I was trying to get the story prepared for the third part of the prologue! The chapters after will be longer and more thought out, but won't be so long where people lose interest. Thanks again!
Hm... Can't say that I'm disappointed with this development. I'm impressed as it has taken a solid step above your previous writings. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I also currently don't have the energy to argue my little nitpicks. That will come at a later time.
Good job.
Thanks for your comments guys! It's be a while, and I forgot to put the story on hold. Well, even though that was a small chapter, I felt that I needed to get out a small portion of my new, more thoughtful writing process. Also, I was trying to get the story prepared for the third part of the prologue! The chapters after will be longer and more thought out, but won't be so long where people lose interest. Thanks again!
5593956 YAAAAAAAAA BOOOOOOIIIIIII!
Thanks Clumsy I appreciate it!
5593956 I have those quite often. Often enough to make me sad, at least.
....again...
Where are the words for the first THREE CHAPTERS!?!?!