Hawkeye Delicious is a stallion with one eye and one goal: vengeance. One year after being shot and left for dead in the desert, Hawkeye returns to the land of the living to hunt down and kill the pony that sold him and his partners out to the notorious Caracaras gang.
The only thing he knows for sure is that the traitorous pony is a member of the Apple family.
His family.
Cover art by totallynotabrony
DAAAANNGGG!
This reminds me alot of red dead redemption
How edgy.
4981835 I detect sarcasm.
Ow yeah an apple western!
Alright, you have my attention.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Keep it coming man.
Well first I'm betting money on Applejack being the one to sell him out in a misguided and retarded belief it would spare the rest of the Apple family and second......
STOP MAKING HIM WEAK!!
My God everywhere I turn when it comes to an OC Protagonist you people make them weak as shit.
Both in skills and mentality.
5569621 Why do you think he's weak?
5569782 Cause he got his ass beat pretty bad there and was panicking there like a house-wife spotting a mouse on the kitchen floor.
Beast gunman huh? I don't fucking think so.
5580137 I never once said he was a beast gunman or a badass.
5580199 And evidently that cowardice showed.
5580471 Look when I wrote this POS I wasn't exactly in the best of spirits. My emotional problems hurt my work. Either that or I'm just a shitty writer. Whatever. Sorry I can't make every OC an ultra badass Mary Sue for you. Because Lord knows that's never been done before.
Has this story been edited since the comments here were posted? I'm confused. I thought Hawkeye did just dandy considering he was outnumbered, deliberately trying not to hurt anypony, AND still managed to get away.
Anywho, I'm digging it! Looking forward to more!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!