It was an average Saturday for Jack as he lounged at home. And yes, this is one of those stories where a human goes to Equestria. Written between seasons 2 & 3 and only roughly edited for spelling for grammar
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Also,
Your mom telling you that doesn't count.
Great...
For some reason this story completely fails to hold my attention. I can't say exactly why. Maybe it's because you jump back and forth between the pony and the human before I can get a good idea of who they are.
4891674 Yeah... I know I did a pretty bad job with the prologue I even considered taking out the scenes with the pony in it altogether there because he doesn't even show up again until the end of the fic. The only reason I didn't is because it seemed really short without it
Oh poor, poor jack. stuck with fashionista rairity.
What does "uh-oh" mean?
Butt..........? How did the first portal form? And the ending came to soon! You need to write a sequel!
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No, they don't swap minds.
Just univereses~