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It was an average Saturday for Jack as he lounged at home. And yes, this is one of those stories where a human goes to Equestria. Written between seasons 2 & 3 and only roughly edited for spelling for grammar

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It was an average Saturday for Jack as he lounged at home.

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Also,

I'm sure those of you who are watching are like "No! Don't stop! You just started!" And I can assure you I have no intention of stopping.

Your mom telling you that doesn't count.

only roughly edited for spelling for grammar

Great...

For some reason this story completely fails to hold my attention. I can't say exactly why. Maybe it's because you jump back and forth between the pony and the human before I can get a good idea of who they are.

4891674 Yeah... I know I did a pretty bad job with the prologue :ajsleepy: I even considered taking out the scenes with the pony in it altogether there because he doesn't even show up again until the end of the fic. The only reason I didn't is because it seemed really short without it

Oh poor, poor jack. stuck with fashionista rairity.:unsuresweetie:

What does "uh-oh" mean?:applejackunsure:

Butt..........? How did the first portal form? And the ending came to soon! You need to write a sequel!:twilightangry2:

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No, they don't swap minds.
Just univereses~ :trollestia:

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