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Her skills, well renowned in the higher caste of the Canterlot upper class.
Her cello, unrivaled at private events and public showings to thousands of ponies at a time.
Her eyes, a dark violet that spoke thousands of words in a single glance.
Her name, Octavia Melody, was uttered with reverence by those who knew of her.
All of this, would soon be forgotten after fate sends her into a path unseen during a walk in the dead of night.
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Hmmm, I believe a, Dun Dun Duunnn is in order?
Oh well, Certianly interesting. I will keep my eye on this, certainly.
I liked this story. It's based on an idea that, while used admittedly quite often, is still an interesting one. More importantly, this story isn't just jumping the bandwagon - Octavia is about to be turned, rather than being a vampire from the start, and, so far, she seems to be an actual character, rather than a name stuck on someone's OC. Probably the most important to me, the spelling is excellent, the grammar is wonderful, the story flows, and word choice isn't... well, just right! It isn't over the top, trying to sound sophisticated, it isn't the same words repeated over and over... All in all, the story quality is top notch, the premise is interesting, and the writer knows what they're doing.
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4927197 Well, thank you so very much! This is actually my first story written for a good long time (6 months or so), so it's good to know that I've got it!
4926584 Dun dun duuuuuns are definitely in order!
GG Snooty Octy
Nice chapter, and your editor must be good because there were no errors whatsoever 
4944969 Believe it or not, I actually don't HAVE an editor
And I actually didn't go back and edit at all either
4945067 I applaud you. If you think sometime that you need an editor I wouldn't mind helping out. :D
4944969
No errors, huh?
The author has forgotten to place a space after the comma.
Nothing too major, albeit. But still a mistake nonetheless.
4946846 Whatevs :3
4946846 Aaaaarg, and I was hoping nobody would notice! :mustache:
Mmm, Well, I am really curious to see what the "Rules" For vampires are in this story. I know each story has its own ideas, and its own ideals. Also weither or not its the "Just a single Bite" Kind of Vampire. I would a bit disappointed if it was, but I will still read on
Its pretty interesting, though If I have to complain (And I do, its Law
) , Then I must say the short nature of the chapters leaves us with a story which has only really moved out of the Alley, and nothing has really been explained about certain details. Then again, thats up to the choice of the individual author, so Meh. 
Though I am unsure how I feel about this, Vampony being so, well, arrogant and agressive with Octavia. I can imagine that Vamponies must somehow have to keep themselves hidden, so the arrogance of this supernatural nature feels a bit iffy.
But then again, an explaination to that could be this Vampony in question is an idiot or a youngster who does not understand the idea of being subtle. Which I can understand.
All in all, I like this, and what was written above was just my thoughts, And I cant really do anything about those, Since I am not writing this
Roll and Write on Chaotic! I will be watching!
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I have special eyes for these things...
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Has the story been canceled? Or no idea how to continue?
5313481 It isn't cancelled. I'm just slowly working on it. Kind of in a writing slump, and have been for the past few months.
Really
nice story can't wait to read the next chapter my only problem with it is that the chapters seem a little short granted you manage to get the point across in such a limited space it feels like your chapters could go a bit longer in length
Need moar