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BRyeMC


The retired "Clarity" story guy.

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This story is a sequel to Bonnibelle and Clyde


Since teaming up a few months ago after their adventure in Appleoosa, Clyde and Miss Rarity Bonnibelle find themselves wanting a break from the outlaw life and soon find themselves in a small town by the name of Dodge Junction. Will their "break" from crime actually be without drama?

Of course not. Rarity is there.


Proofread and edited by Azure_Shadow and CogWing.

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Well... Dat awkward moment when the name of a saloon is the name of the town you live in. :twilightsheepish:

Anyway, in my opinion, there probably WILL be a sequel to this story, focusing in on Clyde getting his things back from Black Stone, since we got left off on a cliffy at the end.

All in all, a nice little story that earned my like and fav. :pinkiehappy:

Great story!

The ending was so cute! :rainbowkiss:

4945562 Glad you think so! Thanks for reading! :raritywink:

That was fun. Quite a good read.

I'm not very good at picking up on hints, so I can't tell if there will be a Bb&C3 or not. I hope there is, though.

If there will be, then there's one thing I would like to say about that. The theme in both of these stories seems to be that Clyde gets captured, despite excelling at his trade, and Rarity is involved in his escape in some way (despite this one having the twist of defeat instead of victory). I feel that a third part with the same formula would make it stale. I think a new kind of story, like a series of successful small robberies that are all connected by one overarching story with a common villain, all leading up to a grand finale, would be a great new idea for a story. Better than the same-old, same-old, anyway.

Just a thought. :duck:

4945663 Thanks!

Yeah, I feel you. The way this ended was a good way for me to bring up the "cute" moment, but I'm still planning on the third one. I don't like repeating story themes, unless we are talking about "The Love of Fate Redux" here. :raritywink:

I like it! I like it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

4975584 Thanks! But, by "chapter" I hope you mean "story". :raritywink:

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Erm, that I do. ^^;

But now why do I feel the urge to make a story off of either a thief or an assassin now? XD

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