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One morning, Princess Twilight Sparkle wakes up. She then proceeds to do incredibly amazing things.

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Please sir, may I have some more.

Also, this sounds familiar to another Twilight 'insert epic name here' Sparkle story.

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Oh my gosh, it's that one person who writes those cool stories!


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Thanks!

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Only if I can muster up enough descriptions for an entire day... so maybe when I have a lot of free time.
Second, really? I thought I was original:applecry:

You know, this reminds me of Neal Stephenson's writing. He never uses 'with great force' when he can say 'with enough potential energy to fling a pound of bacon into the asteroid belt:' at once vividly concrete and a hilarous mental image.

This is meant to be a complement.

:rainbowlaugh: Now have Don LaFontaine do the dramatic reading, and it'll be perfect! :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: /)

Every keystroke slammed home with at least twenty full newtons of force as the author ripped apart entire molecules to produce the energy required to create this story...

And that kids is how you get an 11 sentence incomplete story on fimfiction.

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I read that, but mine is different due to excessive descriptions of the most average morning possible.


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Exactly.:yay: I was trying to aim for 10 sentences, but I tried to go the extra mile.

The abridged version at the end was an excellent touch. Do you narrate your morning to yourself as you get ready?:pinkiecrazy:

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Are you crazy? That means my mornings would take over an hour, I'd need so much time to come up with such descriptions. This thing took me like, 2 hours.

Absolutely brilliant. There is no other way to describe it.

One morning, Princess Twilight Sparkle wakes up. She then proceeds to do incredibly amazing things.

nice description m80

:rainbowlaugh: Hilarious! Duly liked. Also, mithril! Yay Lord of the Rings reference :squee: (and I'm writing in blue for no discernible reason)

Bulk Biceps approves this story! BOO YAH!

This story is so epic, it has caused me to activate devices that have taken centuries, neigh, millennium of technological advancement to create, bend the intense power of a machine able to make millions of calculations a second to my will, slam my fingers mightily down upon keys in sequences that generate symbols in configurations only some are able to derive meaning from, utilizing abstract forms of thoughts to transmit my intent without need of speaking, sending information through the very air itself across the planet with but a few presses of my fingers upon the proper keys, utilizing untold amounts of energy in order to properly convey the amount for which I found this story to be most awesome indeed!

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