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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Fa'al Zuref has been charged with Poniphilia and High Treason, crimes which carry the death penalty for a changeling. Queen Lectin has decided to hear her answer to these accusations.

This is the story she told.

Originally written for the Equestria Daily Outside Insight contest.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Jesus.
I like this.
I like this a lot.

That was excellent. It's always nice to read a good, heartwarming tale before heading off to bed.

My final mini-review post for the competition.

You is in it. Innit?

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Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave a few words! I'd wondered about how it was received.
I did not make the finalists list, but I will take it as a compliment that you felt the need to ask. :twilightsmile:
especially with how many stories you read you're much braver than me :rainbowderp:

Cute little story. Solid 8 out of 10. :twilightsmile:

Not bad. I'm always a sucker for a good changeling fic, and this one fit the bill nicely.

Favorited not only because it's a good story, but because I can identify with Written Script so much.
Excellent work.

This was excellent.
Only complaint with it, where did the guard that jumped her come from? That whole couple of lines was right out of left field and somewhat jumbled.
Otherwise this was awesome.

What a wonderful little tale. :pinkiehappy:

Very intriguing. The conversation is a lovely framing piece and Ponieff/Sunflower is a very sympathetic and enjoyable character.

It's a gathering revolution ready to change changeling M.O. Forever!

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