The Gore tag is for a minor blood scene. If you do not support LGBT rights and refuse to know what's going on and how to stop it turn back now.
In a different time the land of Equestria was filled with mostly Homosexuals. mares liked mares and stallions liked stallions. The only time a Mare and a Stallion would be together that way is if it was breeding season /or/ if they were straight. Rainbow Dash is your typical mare she plays sports and she pays attention in school when she's not being the class clown. Soarin is your typical stallion he tries out for school plays and he watches soap operas. When these two meet there life changes.
This story is based on a short film I found on YouTube. If you want a more detailed way to get the point across I suggest you watch the video first. My story has an Alternate ending that is not shown in the video. Imagine A World Where Being "Gay" The Norm & Being "Straight" Would Be The Minority! [Short Film]
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This, in essence.
Go back to tumblr, you incessant tumblrite. Do you seriously need to bring this in? The argument doesn't even make sense, seeing as if a species was mostly homosexual, it would /fail/ horribly and die out, as most idiot clop/comedy/SJW writers seem to magically forget, but hey, this is tumblr right? Whatever, I guess it's your right to post what you want, just as much is my right to disagree.
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What happened to freedom of the internet? Maybe I don't support homosexualism in it's entirety! Used to be on the internet, there weren't any barriers between users, but it seems assholes like you just want to build them up on the net and IRL too. Hrm. There's a type of person that's like that.
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But hey! Maybe one day you'll grow up to be a U.S. G.I. instead.
Anyways, tumblrite:
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Thank god you had this warning or I might have read something that disagrees with my extremist views! I'll just go masturbate with my guns while reading aloud from the bible and wondering why I even have an internet connection, since I'm illiterate and live in the back woods. Another victory for social justice!
As someone who supports LGBT rights (or GSM rights, if you prefer), I think this story concept is kind of in poor taste.
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Funny thing how this story has that exact intent, to put people who don't entirely conform to the author's ideals, down. Ironic, ain't it?
4924300 Tonight, you...
hmmmmm nope
Not gonna read this
Kay, I watched that video, and I cried. I read your story, and I also cried. Though not for the reasons you may think... The description alone made me cringe.
Wait so in this universe everyone is "naturally" gay yet still have straight sex just for procreation.
This premise....I can't frown at it hard enough. Because it makes no sense.
Hey... I don't usually get involved with things like this, and I won't again for a long time, but...
Maybe you could reword your little warning?
I understand that you are for LGBT rights, as am I, but when you attack those who do not support it, you are essentially being just as close-minded as them. People will read this story and have their opinions, but it's clear that the wording has disturbed both those who do not support LGBT stuff AND those who do.
Put a trigger warning on, but maybe be a little more kind about it. Just some advice.
Don't take it personally.
I originally planned to have a really long, really in-depth critique of this super clumsy fic of yours. Instead I'll just post a vid that does a much better job to subvert "acceptable" social behaviors in lieu of upturning logic for the sake of a "thought experiment" to get a point across.
BTW none of the characters were even close to being believable and might as well have been a cast of poorly constructed OCs with the same names as the ponies (and a griffon) in the show.
New ending now!
I like this ending better
4925507 Dude, I was trying to get your attention. And no, we aren't going to be speaking of the story. How are you today?
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:/ sleepy
4925525 I see.
4924798 So because of that, this story is suddenly making no sense, but in this video it makes sooooo much sense. Okay.
Oh, this story is based off of this. Okay.
I take back everything I said. I dislike this story. You just copied everything from the video. I'm done, k.
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We wouldn't exist.
Instead of putting out this warning:
Which is sort of like saying, "Go fuck yourself if you don't conform to my world views." You should have put:
Because honestly, this could've honestly worked out if this was some sort of social satire or comedy, but instead it decided to be edgy and gritty as fuck. That makes you look like a pretentious dickweed who will guilt people into supporting LGBT stuff, (even if they were pretty okay if guys could shag other guys) instead of letting them decide what they want to do.
Overall, your story is just the same old song and dance. Instead this time Celestia's persecuting the straights instead of the gays, and even then it's not that new a concept. Another thing that made me sick is the whole church scene. Are you honestly that ignorant to think that this is what the preach in churches? In church, you read sermons, learn lessons from Bible, etc. They do not rail on the gays every ten seconds. Hell, even the Pope is okay with the gays, and he's essentially God's right hand man.
Not only that everyone is out of fucking character! By the end of this story, I hated all of your interpretations of the characters. I hated RD for being a punching bag, I hated Soarin for being a love interest for no other reason than to serve the plot, and I hated everyone else for being a cunt.
And that alternate chapter! How preachy can you get with that last paragraph? I could probably find something like that on Tumblr or on a quote of the day calendar without even trying.
Your story is yet another MLP LGBT soapbox-fic saying "We should all love and hug each other! Anyone who says otherwise will be absorbed into the hive-mind against their will!" It's just so pretentious and preachy it's hard to take seriously, every character is an unlikable dipshit, the plot is lackluster and even a Johnny Q. Scumfuck could predict the outcome of your story. Better luck next time.
Here's the funny thing. I'm a big supporter of LGBT rights and feel they should have the right to do everything the rest of us take for granted without fear of reprisal. This includes, but isn't limited to, marriage, adoption, being president, joining the army, etc.
But one thing I fucking hate are soapboxes thinly disguised as stories. It's where you take your personal ideals and inject them into a story for the purpose of either changing people's minds or simply pushing them on others. That's simply done in poor taste. And this story is a perfect example of it.
Your characters don't even act like real characters. They're cardboard cutouts of cliches that are then given the names of the characters from the show. I'm also not a fan of religion but even I was saying during the church scene that you were taking things a little too far.
Sorry, but this story fails on so many levels that I honestly can't even tell you where to fix it. Just go.
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Well for one having a country full of gays is biological impossible. Secondly given the 5:1 ratio of mare and stallion, lesbians is a given in that soceity. Thus this is why we have much more yuri then straight fics.
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There's no 5:1 to ratio. It's about 1:1.
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It's literally a ponification of the video mentioned in the summary.
4927832 If that's the case, you may have a plagiarism case. You could report this.
If you dont like the story then just say you don't like it. I appreciate your feedback and criticism (some not as constructive as others). It means I can do better, I actually have done better. I'm just trying to get my point across there's no need to be as rude as you are. A friendly dislike would help.
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Plagiarism? Really? So does that mean the mods are gonna have to deal with the dozens upon dozens of fics that literally ponify other series/things with little to no change to plot/setting? You're silly. Such a silly buns.
4926430 There's breeding season, duh.
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Oh, fantastic. Another story with a controversial topic where rather than focusing on telling a good story the author just wants to use well liked characters to forcibly make them give out of character credibility to a given philosophy. Christ, I really hope I don't see a third one of these hit my desk soon, or else that would make this a trend.
4924287 summed it up pretty well with the picture. One of the worst displays of disrespect towards a given canon character, particularly well liked ones such as our six favorite mares, is to disregard anything about their canon personality's depth and have them act OOC just to prove a given point. It shows that you don't care about these characters at all and only intend to use them to advance your beliefs.
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Only room for one commander on this thread, bud. I demand satisfaction. Sabers to first blood.
P.S. Quite fond of nazi paraphernalia I see.
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Didn't even read the story.
My Tumblr idiocy and Ponies being used as cheap mouthpieces senses easily flared up.
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Read a little bit and my eyes started rolling so hard that they flew off and I'm pretty sure achieved Mach 10 before burning up in the stratosphere.
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Your eyes, they have good taste.
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Sometimes too good for their own good it would seem. The only way I am typing this now is by dictating the words to my trained parakeet.
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Is it cutely pecking at the keyboard?
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Yes, I am
Dammit, Archimedes. You're only supposed to type what I say.
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Polly want a cracker?
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I can't help but read your text with the most blatant valley girl accent possible.
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I'm a parakeet, not a parrot, you racist fuck.
Archimedes, what the hell are you typing now?
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But birds still like crackers.
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Some birds like crackers. Some humans like getting fucked in the ass. Do you like getting fucked in the ass?
Whoa, Archimedes. When did you get so vulgar? Sorry about him, Kabar.
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Archimedes, there's a difference between a sex act and food.
Fowler, it's fine. I deal with edgy pre-teens everyday.
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Tell me about it. He's hit that preteen phase where he's just learned several curse words and wants to use them like crazy. He's also using another tab to write an angsty first person HiE alicorn fic.
Shut up, Commander! You just don't understand my pain!
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He's surprisingly endearing.
So... did you get your eyes back?
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I got the ashes back. That's a start.
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Just give 'em some phoenix blood, they'll be fine.
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Huh. Go figure. That actually worked.