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That chapter was... amazing.
Dafuk? why is NO ONE commenting on this great story?????/ this must not go unpunishede!
I'm so sorry, but i'm gonna have to leave this story now. I just can't stand when people bring some 'ALL F'CKING POWERFUL BEING/ARMY/ETC THAT LIKE DESTROYS THE WORLD. I would've loved it if he just went leviathan and then had to do shit for the princesses or something to atone for his actions.
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also, perfect reading material while listening to Disturbed
The level of power creep in this story is absolutely ridiculous. Let's see....
Faster than Rainbow Dash? Check.
More Magical than Twilight? Check.
I haven't seen evidence yet that he could oveshadow the other mane six, but I'm certain you could pull it off if you REALLY tried. You really REALLY need to think hard about where you are going with this story, bro. As it stands, we have a protagonist who is supremely unsympathetic, for a multitude of reasons, but mostly because he really has no FLAWS. He has a typical "tragic backstory" (tm). I understand that you have some kind of ultimate showdown of ultimate destiny planned with this thing, possibly this Reiku dude you keep talking about, but... well, right now, I'm kinda rooting for Reiku... this guy killed quadrillions of folks because he was having a bad millennia? Dude.
To give you an idea of what that means, are you aware that as of 2011, the estimated total number of human births on earth, that means from the beginnings to our history, to 2011, was only (I can't believe I'm saying ONLY) an estimated 108 billion? Let's try to conceive of this, because this is literally one of the biggest numbers I've ever worked with. 1 quadrillion is 1,000,000,000,000,000. Rounding off the other number, 108 billion, for ease of calculation, we get 100,000,000,000. As a ratio, that can be simplified to 1:10,000.
This means that, if he had ONLY killed one quadrillion (you mentioned he killed quadrillionS) than he has killed approximately TEN THOUSAND sentients for every man, woman, and child ever born on earth. Throughout its history. Ever. Give or take a few hundred.
Are you even reading what you're writing? That's... just Re-god-damn-diculous. I'm sorry. I really want to like this story, but... I just can't. I tried really hard to like the main character. I just can't.
Even the gods of greek mythology had flaws, bro. Zeus was a huge irresponsible pervert. Hera was a jealous shrew. This guy is the sad little dark god who murdered a shit ton of people more than have ever existed on earth and then thinks that the fact that he could do it again doesn't justify wiping him off the face of whatever planet he happens to reincarnate to. Yes, it's sad that his loved ones have paid the price for his existence. Even Hitler had a mother, and I'm sure she loved him.
Sorry. Good luck to you, and thanks for... well, thanks I guess. For the record, I don't downvote stories or anything. I sincerely hope you take a good luck at the direction you're going with the story and at least think about it a bit.
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Bah~
....WHERE THE HELL IS CELESTIA IN ALL THIS???!!!
4144056 really though