It's just another day for Fluttershy until she see's a pony in the garden . . . . . .She is quickly thrown into a world she rather have forgotten. Her family hid her away form the life of the Assassins. But when her past calls for her she has no choice but to join the guild. If only to help her save her friends who are being used as energy farms or an ancient device known as the Apple Of Tirek. But she won't be alone in her journey, A assassin master will help her find her friends and find the murder of their parents.
( Chapter coming every Wednesday ) (( Enjoy ! ))
Chapter 4 coming Sunday ! Enjoy
Seems decent although you should get an editor. The grammar and spelling mistakes are a bit annoying. I don't penalyse for those, though.
5122200 Thank you, and I will try to get a professional reader. Please have a wonderful day !
HOW DID THIS GET FEATURED IF IT HAS ONE LIKE AND TWO DISLIKES, HOW!?!
you might want to correct this
Why is this in the feature box. Look at how bad the ratio is!
5122284 Sorry I will
5122559 it's cool
Why is this in the feature box if it has 6 likes and 4 dislikes!?
I'm not saying that the story is bad (I haven't read it), it just that is weird and unfair. The ratio isn't good!
5122405 Gee thanks for making me feel good
I it.
You should join my club @ My Little Assassin's Creed please.
5130846 The club of my dreams, thank you , Could you send a link ?
5131103 http://www.fimfiction.net/group/205248/my-little-assassins-creed
Enjoy!
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I'm in
New Chapter enjoy !
this is a great read keep going
5174492 Thank you a new chapter is coming tomorrow and every Thursday !
For all who read this I'm sorry there hasn't been an update for awhile, it will continue by the end of the month.
Have a nice day !
New chapter near Christmas