Darkness is a living thing. It consumes the strong and destroys the weak, not knowing the meaning of mercy. It corrupts and devours until there is no light left within one's heart.
What happens when the young mare who wields the Element of Magic succumbs to the Darkness?
You are hiding chapters until they get proofread? Cause that would explain the 17k words.
5152156 Actually, they're all done. I'm going to publish a new chapter every couple of days. You can expect chapter 2 tomorrow, though.
Well.. This is gona get interesting. Dark magic twilight... Ya bad thing. Bad things are coming.
5152162 So this all is already finished?
5152321 Basically, yes.
5152329 Basically? What does that mean?
5152334 By "basically," I mean yes. Whenever I use words like that, just ignore them.
5152345 I felt like I read something like this before with the same beginning.
5152650 The comments or the story?
I thinks this story is great i myself, is writing a twibra story and love to read the ones others make. I like how you don't use too much time with twi getting to know sombra. A little advice: try not to go too fast because if you do then it will lose its gripping effect. So basicly remember you have time and don't rush books.
Keep up the good work
Another great chapter. Maybe make them a little longer...
A few mistakes here and there and the fact that we don't get much detail in sombras army (who, training, armor/wepons)
But a good exiting chapter
Intresting story
Things get exiting now don't they
Maybe a little more power to celestia she is the princess of the Sun after all
MORE
Well shit hit the fan quikly
So that's how Celestia was able to use Dark Magic while teaching Twilight about the Empire...
and I'm guessing the statue in question is Discord, right?
Loving the whole thing
wow sombra has his own master, wow this is like sith lord stuff hehe
take a shot for every time yo uread the word magic...we know it's magic they are shooting yu don't have to keep repating that over and onver. or at last use differnt things like beam of energy, waves a light I dont know something.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aww I was hoping she would stay dark butt I can't wait to see who the new villain is he sounds cool