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LordLycaon


Yes, I am a werewolf. Yes, I will tear your face off if you irritate me. No, I can't be bribed with doggy treats. Don't feed the gremlins.

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Darkness is a living thing. It consumes the strong and destroys the weak, not knowing the meaning of mercy. It corrupts and devours until there is no light left within one's heart.

What happens when the young mare who wields the Element of Magic succumbs to the Darkness?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 22 )

You are hiding chapters until they get proofread? Cause that would explain the 17k words.

Comment posted by LordLycaon deleted Oct 17th, 2014

5152156 Actually, they're all done. I'm going to publish a new chapter every couple of days. You can expect chapter 2 tomorrow, though.

Well.. This is gona get interesting. Dark magic twilight... Ya bad thing. Bad things are coming.

5152162 So this all is already finished?

5152329 Basically? What does that mean?

5152334 By "basically," I mean yes. Whenever I use words like that, just ignore them.

5152345 I felt like I read something like this before with the same beginning.

5152650 The comments or the story?

I thinks this story is great i myself, is writing a twibra story and love to read the ones others make. I like how you don't use too much time with twi getting to know sombra. A little advice: try not to go too fast because if you do then it will lose its gripping effect. So basicly remember you have time and don't rush books.

Keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

Another great chapter. Maybe make them a little longer...

:twilightsmile:

A few mistakes here and there and the fact that we don't get much detail in sombras army (who, training, armor/wepons)
But a good exiting chapter:twilightsmile:

Things get exiting now don't they:twilightsmile:
Maybe a little more power to celestia she is the princess of the Sun after all:trollestia:

Well shit hit the fan quikly:raritycry:

So that's how Celestia was able to use Dark Magic while teaching Twilight about the Empire...

and I'm guessing the statue in question is Discord, right? :duck:

Loving the whole thing :yay:

wow sombra has his own master, wow this is like sith lord stuff hehe

take a shot for every time yo uread the word magic...we know it's magic they are shooting yu don't have to keep repating that over and onver. or at last use differnt things like beam of energy, waves a light I dont know something.

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww I was hoping she would stay dark butt I can't wait to see who the new villain is he sounds cool

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