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The Story Man
I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.
The Story Man
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Needs more dick girl.
-Disco
Needs more Dickgirl.
I'm surprised it didn't escalate in Vinyl's shower.
I have the feeling that there's going to be a threequel
5175217 Is two not enough?
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No, the threequel is gonna have dickgirls, or we're gonna rebel, like 5175252 said.
5175257 Well now that you mention dickgirls...
5175237 it just seems too open ended for it to just end like this.
Just get together and fuck already!
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Yes! #occupystoryman
We are the 99%!
I kind of want another with a little more romance in it, but that's just the hopeless romantic in me.
Interesting read... It did make me queasy reading the part about Vinyl eating a damn burrito during a blow job. I'm both impressed and happy to see there are still things in this world that can disturb me.
For some reason i think vinyl's real reason of doing stuff for him is that shes trying to make him fall for her in her own way. But that's just me
Dammit I thought a sequel would sate my desire for this, but now I just want a 3rd installment!
The cover art is better on the first one
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It's just a placeholder pic, I'm getting another one soon.
Actually, I do want to fight about it. PUT UP THOSE FISTS!
story man. stories like this is why I follow you. good work my friend
Oh lord, even the reader gets teased throughout the fic. Just have them hook up already, either during the party or in a third fic (please?)
Either way, this was a fun story
Maybe when Vinyl got the call, she was setting up the character with Octavia. Anyone else thinking that?
Nice one once again. Maybe one day I read one of your stories as the are intended to be.
Like last time I personally do not fancy all the cohitus interruptus. But I still feel it as fitting for Vinyls character.
In all a good story, but I agree with the others saying that it is a very open end.
5176144 YAY!! JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA!!!
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5175264 This Octavia?
5175858 it think so too.
To be honest i would prefer it if she isn´t just for the sex, well since it is a clopfic i would not mind such a reason, but i prefer it if she is in some way after him. I think only because she is wild and like to party, she don´t have to be after every cock or that foward and i don´t prefer her as a slut or well...i don´t know the word for it right know.
I liked the first one more and the cover art was better in the first story.
For me it was positiv that we had more or less more story here.
5176661 You sir deserve a medal
JUST FUCK ALREADY
I'd really like to see these characters in a full story but I know thats unlikly. This version of Vinyl is interesting and I wanna know more about her. Does she really consider oral sex to be a casual thing like a hug between friends or is there something else going on here. I must know!
big whoop
i wanna fite about it
5176661 Eh, she likes him, but I think Vinyl's got her own insecurities. She's putting up a front. Eventually she'll cave, blurt some sort of affection at him (if he hasn't found another girl by then...but based on his luck...I doubt it). She's probably worried about losing him as a friend if she becomes emotionally intamate with him (the physical part's already been done twice). She's a tough girl, formed by her peers. But she is a good friend. Just not a very good girl at expressing herself. Everything she does is a front. Pretty well done by the author, if you ask me. The writing was very convincing.
You don't say, Octy...
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Not even going to fuck around here. There is going to be a third story, I got inspired to do it by the requester.
Now here's the bad news. I have other stories so it'll be a while away from now. Secondly, sex is probably not guaranteed. I will tell you guys who seem to read into this, no, she's not romantically involved with the anon. I mean, there is a reason for that, but I'll save that for the third (and final) installment.
Anyway, glad you all enjoyed it (at least I think so). Feel free to reply with your thoughts on the news.
...funniest....shit....ever.... I loved the cell phone call
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YAY!
Probably no sex? Damn (probably)
And a tad disappointed about no love, but Vinyl is a strong independent woman who don't need no man anyway, so...
But yeah, take your time; you're the boss after all
> Fucks up grammar in description.
> Gets featured.
There is no justice in this world.
Also, prepare yourself for a certain rage-review from me, I hate the following: Unflowing romance (Let's bang.) I hate... Second person fics, I hate mature rated second person fics, I certainly hate when somebody fucks up their description, I rather dislike any kind of fic that wants to gain popularity.
So basically, I'll end up hating every aspect of this.
Present tense second person clopfic.
Nope, I'm out.
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Have to ask this, but if you hated everything about it from the start, why did you come here and comment?
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Seeing that you apparently hate anything that is pretty much this story, I'm wondering: How did you end up here?
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Because God forbid an author have a desire for other people to enjoy his work.
Dat cover art doh
Dick problems, HAHAHAHA oh man, that was hilarious. Good stuff, good stuff!
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'Gaining popularity' and 'people enjoying your work' are two things to never be confused, here's the deal. 1. Clopfics attracts an audience of (mostly) teenage boys. 2. Second person fics tends to attract much of the same audience (there's a reason that it's generally frowned upon when it comes to actual books.) and, 3. It's featuring a humanized version of a popular background pony from the show, thus they can write whatever they want and nobody can complain about the character acting OOC.
How I ended up here was rather simple 'Maybe, just maybe, I may end up changing my opinion' but lo and behold, I did not.
Also, thank you for sparing me many painful hours of slowly snailing my way through this fic by simply saying that I hated everything about it just from what I described (which was mostly related to jack-material for teenage boys, since 'unflowing romance' was in there.)
5178188 Touche. Come to think of it, what the hell am I doing here?
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Dude. Keep this cover art. It's almost too good. It must never be hidden from the world.
5177680 Well I can't wait to see it! Any estimate on how long the 3rd fic will be?
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I'm not so sure why you're getting so upset over this single story. Judging from the like to dislike ratio, your opinion is in the minority here. People like this story just fine, and if you don't that's fine, just don't act so brash about it.
Writing almost exclusively smut stories doesn't make you a terrible writer and a story that lacks romance isn't a bad thing. The original story was about Anon hanging out with Vinyl, which eventually leads to a casual handjob. Not sex scene need to be romantic and two people don't have to fall in love to have sex.
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Month or two maybe if I make it a priority.
Kind of want to touch some other projects though.
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Anyway, a friend of mine had some choice words regarding your comments. Unfortunately he doesn't have a fimfic account so I'm going to post what he said for him:
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5178188 In a couple of ways I do indeed agree with you that alot of 2nd persons are only "jack" material. This being said I also have to disagree with you. The reason that 2nd persons are so popular (with the people who enjoy them) is because it puts you in a situation of your own then tells how you are going to carry on with it. its true this pisses off alot of people but for those with a more "vivid" mind will quite enjoy playing with the scenario. Also I understand why you want to voice your opinion but is it really necessary to keep coming back? After you realized you didn't like the story, did you downvote it because you didn't like the point of view? Then why tell others who do enjoy it, that it's bad? Or would you downvote it because the story really was bad no matter what? Point is, if you dont like it, then leave.
5178873 Yup, that's a Bluud rant right there