Luna looked at the animated pony with confusion.
Okaaay.
Then a beep sound came from the xbox which made Luna jump.
In the middle of the screen there was a box saying that the remote was disconnected. Luna levitated the manual in front of her face and flipped through the instructions.
She finally found the page she was looking for. It told her to get a battery pack, she assumed that it was the black rectangle, and that she should put it into the remote, which she assumed was the other object with buttons and two 'control sticks' on it.
She did what the guide had told her to do and then looked at the manual again. It said that she needed to hold down the large silver button. She decided that she should use her magic to do so and she pushed down the button with her force.
The box on the screen disappeared and Luna saw the animated pony again. She observed the pony but the only thing to observe was a white coat on it. It sort of looked like a mannequin.
She looked at the instructions again and looked at the controls. Once she figured them out she pressed the 'a' button on the pony and a set of options to customise the pony appeared. She looked through all the options and tried to make the pony look like herself.
Once she finished she ended up with a animated pony of herself. Then a box appeared on the screen and asked her what she wanted to call her profile. Luna typed in 'Luna' and then selected enter.
A second after that the box disappeared and she found herself looking at a number of box's on the screen. She moved the joystick and found that she could select any of the boxs.
She looked at all of them and her attention was caught by a box labeled 'games'.
She selected it but a box appeared onto the screen. It said that she didn't have any games and said to her if she wanted to download any.
Luna selected yes and then a bunch of box's appeared onto the screen.
But one caught Luna's attention.
Games luna should play. Borderlands (1, 2, or Pre-sequel), Titanfall, and the tell tale games walking dead pls!
Thanks Dream seeker
She should play forza horizon
This story needs a lot of work. For starters, make your chapters at least 1,200 words unless your writing is Edgar Allen Poe level. That means loads and loads of detail, which will make this story more exciting for me to get into. As of now this is dreadfully boring, and I can't get invested into it. On the plus side, you're grammar is pretty decent.
Don't worry, the more interesting chapters should start to come out soon. Also thanks for both pointing out the good and bad things about this story
This has attrwmy attention. Do Transformers the Fall of Cybertron please by the way.
Have her play skyrim, mass effect or dragon age